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by rubycrush

person Answers
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a bloddy idiot! If i was Draco i wold go ape shit at him I think it would be better if at the last second Pansy decides to curse Draco, that way Harry could be really worried about him, you know a few final moments, but then he survives? Anyone thanxs for updateing i Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Mini review)

(Absolutely frothing at the mouth!!!!!!!!) PANSY YOU FUCKING DUMBASS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Proceeds to hunt Pansy down with an absolutely vicious looking poleaxe)

Dear GOD somebody KILL HER!!!!!!!!!!! In P.I.E.C.ES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'ll help.... (Pulls meat cleaver out of back pocket & proceeds to patiently sharpen the edge...)

Now I\'ll head off to work!!

^.--
person LongBlackSatinLace
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Can\'t wait to see the results of the Gryffindor victory, why Goyle would hit a Bludger at Malfoy, and if Pansy actually hexes Hermione successfully. I hope she doesn\'t. Stupid bint!
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please PLEASE post the next chapter soon! I want them to kiss and have Lucius see, that would be great. Anyway, thanks for the AWESOME story!
person sbkar
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this update was too short! How is Pansy going to futz this up?
person Saske\'s Iris
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok draco still wants him( that was a good dream in the begining). Harry is still totally distracted by Draco (the world fades away with a touch). I am sooo ready for something to happen so these two can start interacting again. The carl jealousy thing looks promising would be nice to see Draco get protective over potter...smirk i am loving this story and can\'t wait for an update oohh boy oh boy...give u a cookie if u give me an update!
person Ver-chan
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, i just love this fic^^
I.......can\'t.......wait for the next chapter. the way you\'ve portraied Harry and Draco is just so right.
There\'s no way I can imagine them any other way, you\'ve done a great job.^^
#gives you a huggle-muffin and throws yellow sparklies in the air#
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay
person OldLoves
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! You did a good job with the Quidditch match. It was just fine. You have to hurry up and write the next chapter, please. I have to know what happens with Pansy and Hermione. I really didn\'t expect the story to turn like this, but I\'m loving it!

Old loves, they die hard... Old lies, they die harder...

Morgane
person Ali
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read chapter 19!!!