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for Amphitrite

by AndreaLorraine

person bean1498
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I love your stories! I love your style and the plots are amazing. God I wish I had your talent. :) I hope you plan to keep going with this one. I love the characters and the the way you've redeemed the 'bad guys'. It's creative and fun and sexy. Yeah you. :)
person hkapple
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is a really really interesting story!!! i'm so glad i came over it. with all the greek gods and the potion.......

do please update it soon... i just cant wait to see if severus can brew tat potion and whether Lucius manage to wriggle his way out of this joint... ^^
person maud
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello, I've only read to the chapter four but I quite like the story, your french is good and do not worry about grammar i'm french myself and don't remember all the rules!!!!!, just to say its spell treize and not trieze, i'm looking forward reading this story in its all, you're a good writer.

ps: please do not mind the spelling or grammar mistakes!!!!!
person browneyes2yu
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I really like your Snape and Hermione, your Lucius is...quite interesting, I've never read him in such a characterization. I am not sure that he's very believable though, but then again I am Lucius/Hermione and Snape/Hermione shipper (but not menage-a-trois (sp?), so if I am reading Snape/Hermione I don't like to see Lucius with anyone else and vice versa. Anyway, I still like the story...oh, the Russian guy, Joeri you said...did you mean Yuri? (I am Russian, native speaker, and never heard of a Russian name like that) Anyway, while I am reviewing...just wanted to let you know I love your stories and really cant wait to read more of Some Blond Fool(s) and Thirsty,Hngry, Crazy (especially, love it!)...
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an intriguing story, I like it very much and will be checking for updates. It would actually be a good story on it's own. you should consider the prospect of adapting it into a story without the HP characters. But until then keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the rest.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I've been wanting to read this for a while but haven't been able to find the time until today. So now it is after 4 am but I am all caught up. I just wanted to let you know that I really like this story and I can't wait to read more!
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person DB1
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@17 OMG its been ages since you last updated!!! love the story, write more soon!!!


*DB*
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! This is an absolutely fabulous story doll! Very intriguing and well thought out! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Tenar10r
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters so quickly! I am really enjoying this story. I'd love morr stories dealing with magic of old places and times.