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Wow, this is one of the best Snamione stories I ever read. And I love the way how you add those mysteries that make whole story more interesting. ^____^

Amazing story, I'm assuming this has been abandoned. Hopefully not!

To begin, I have to say that this story is amazingly well written... Especially since the company it keeps on this site is usually far from great writing; There are many stories here that are entertaining, but lacking in some aspect. Amphitrite is great writing... professional, even. Every part of this story seems so well planned that it's hard to believe that you've written this on the fly...? So, I check back here all the time, to see if you've updated again. Even after all this time without any further chapters, I haven't given up hope that you will finish this story. It is a joy for me to find fanfic that actually has a plot and is so compelling. Please don't abandon this.

I had read part of this story ages ago and was so dissapointed to not see any updates for so long and then yesterday something reminded me of it and I thought I would check to see if by some miracle there had been anything added and when I saw that there was I yelled and clapped so loud my kids thought I had lost my mind. I was so thrilled that I had 5 new chapters to read that I cleared my schedule, got through chores and errands and locked myself away from the world with a cup of tea, some cookies, and a threat to kill anyone who dared disturb me. It was so worth it too!! Thanks so much for not abandoning this story. It has been one of my very favorites and is so great that I can't belive its a fanfic. Please, please don't abondon this fic. I want so much to be able to read it through to the end. It has taken years but it is very much worth the waiting and hoping. Thanks again for updating it. Jaimie

Loving it! I can actually like Lucius the way you've portrayed him. Am waiting with bated breath for the next chapter(s)!

I found this through a link on someone else's page and remembered the first few chapters from somewhere else, though I know that I hadn't read as far as 17, so I started again from the beginning, and now, at the end of chapter 17, I find myself hoping that this story gets picked up again at some point, and finished at another.

I love the OCs you have created, they aren't Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu-esque and I love that Lucius isn't totally reformed - I think that the way you have depicted him makes him seem even more 'human'.

Good luck in your grad-studies (I have just started my fourth year of part-time study for a degree in English literature while working full-time), and I hope that Amphitrite sees your attention again...

OH!!!!! PROMETHEUS?!?!?! Prometheus L Bound is our ultimate evil villain??? i guess, mythologically speaking, that makes sense, but this role seems a tad destructive for him. im quibbling (a myspace profile quiz, greek mythology personality quiz, says im alot like him); just conveying my scandalized, hungry-for-more reaction. WOW!!!! i love this!!!! i was reading a review of HTC where the reviewer said they went and read your other stories and loved every one, and since im less than two weeks out of my first year of grad school, im a lazy kat reading all the yummy fanfic i find. i found this one several months before, but had trouble with snape's characterization - he seemed a bit masochistic. i dont know what it was (lucius and the american after reading several new chapters of HTC and SBF, mayhap?), but i got past the sticking point and i fell ass over tits down a freakin amazing rabbit hole!!!! the direction you took the romantic premise was perfect, from an action, romance, and intellectual, so-thats-where-wizards-came-from perspective. i havent looked at your remaining fics, eyes starting to blur together, but ill be keeping an eye on on updates for ALL of them. i know grad school is rough - my own fanfic has been on academic hold - but your writing is amazing and you've got a lot of readers salivating for a word, a syllable! the moment you're ready to post it. cant wait to read a drop in the ocean and strange allies.

i literally stopped reading IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHAPTER to write this (i couldnt even wait to get down to the bottom of the page!):

chapter 15
Dos Santos Escola para Bruxas, Lisbon???
I wish i new about that school when i was 11 years old!! LOL
Poor ,poor Lucius, he is in trouble..again! I believe you have some kind of Love/Hate relationship with my poor wizard!I'm reading this story and "Some Blonde Fool" and one of my favorites so far " Hungry Thirsty Crazy", and why, oh why do you have to make him hurt so much when you write him so beautifully??
Anyway I love your Severus and the plot is great!The God's in Olympus are wizards? Great! just great!

I love this story. Please don't abandon it. Its well crafted and original.