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by nrvana06

person Sommer
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Part.
WooHoo, Draco noticed her.
Now he has to get his head out of his butt and go after her before else gets there first.
Can\'t wait for more.
person carabella
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good start, im interested, so keep writing:)
person Amy
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen next. If you happen to have longer chapter I Certainly wouldn\'t have a problem with that!!!!
person Sommer
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Part.
I can\'t wait for Draco to walk in on her.
Maybe Blaise or someone will like her and he\'ll get jealous.
Can\'t wait to find out what happenes.
person Loziana
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little short but a good teaser can\'t wait to see what happens
person mistyeyes129
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is interesting and i like it because instead of hermione showing off her \"new & improved\" body she covers it up by wearing bigger clothes in my mind this is totally original and the complete opposite of more than half of the stories featuring hermione l love itttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sommer
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for more.
I can\'t wait to see Draco\'s reaction to Hermiones....err...change in body.
person Jason
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great So far.
Update soon.
person Lance
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I need more.
Update soon.
person Sage
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so good.
Can\'t wait to read more