rate_review Reviews

That was awsome!

Wonderful Story I can\'t wait for more!!!

~Dreams

this is one of the best stories i\'ve ever read. it\'s only the beginning and I love it. can\'t wait to see the end. I wonder what\'s going to happened next chapter. keep up the good work.

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great Parts.
I can\'t wait for them to actually get to gether.

that was fun. I loved when she discovered that Draco had pulled the plug! LOL I can\'t wait to see what happens, so get writing.

WTF kep writing i wonder what he will say or what she will say damn cliffies.......bye

HOLY SHIT! sorry about my language, I love your story very much, it\'s SO EXCITING. I\'m completely in it. WE don\'t know whats going to happen next and thats the beauty of it. lol. to me it is. I love this prude Hermione and wicked draco, I can\'t believe hermione is ashame of her body, she probably has a body to envy. lol. Can\'t keep draco without clothes, can you.*teasing* I love it. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND KEEP UPDATING. You have tight on your little finger. lol. *grins* I completely love your story.*smiles happily* I love stories like this. Where the girl is inexperience, and inoccent as an angel and it\'s up to the bad, wicked, bad boy to teach. I LOVE IT. ^-^\"

Otherwise I enjoied it alot, but your spelling is really weak, and definitely needs correcting

well, you definately need a beta...................