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for Avoiding Marriage

by GraceJames

person thrnbrooke
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love rereading this!
person firefairy
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
through, not thru- but apart from that your fic is brill, if a little ooc! ^.^ keep it up!
person Anyanka
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So now that all chapters are updated I see that\'s really a good story, at the begining I thought it was a one-shot, so just ignore my other review. I can\'t wait to read the sequel:)
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when did snape become harrys dad?!
person Anyanka
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the end??? I find it a bit. empty? isn\'t something missing?
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love rereading this!
person myniephoenix
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon my friend... this story is so good thus far... :)
person Platonic Muse
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO. This story is so.....lacking. It lacks character development. It lacks description. It lacks POINT. I almost gave up with Draco\'s pathetic \"Harder. I need to feel you fuck me through the mattress,\" but for some reason completely unbeknownst to me, I trudged forth. What did I find? THIS: