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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep ot going! I can\'t wait till you update.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A threesome story! Can\'t wait!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Draco\'s gonna be so angry when he sees behind Harry\'s Glamours! Thanks for the amazing update, I can\'t wait for more!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great second chapter though i kinda wish that the story would have moved forward, please update.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great!
However, when do we get to the Snarry part? :(
We\'ve already been introduced to the Malter (Malfoy&Potter) or Drarry (Draco&Harry...take your pick) part...now me want to see Snarry...*bawls her eyes out*
:D
hehehe taht was my crazy alter ego...dont mind her! Update sooN!!
However, when do we get to the Snarry part? :(
We\'ve already been introduced to the Malter (Malfoy&Potter) or Drarry (Draco&Harry...take your pick) part...now me want to see Snarry...*bawls her eyes out*
:D
hehehe taht was my crazy alter ego...dont mind her! Update sooN!!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful update
the pov change seems a little redundant tho...pov changes (of the same scene) are only necessary when the plot is deepened and we need some indepth character analysis.
all in all, however, it is good!
I had hoped that the story would move on tho :/ oh well!
dont take offense to this...this is constructive criticism! :D
cant wait for next update
the pov change seems a little redundant tho...pov changes (of the same scene) are only necessary when the plot is deepened and we need some indepth character analysis.
all in all, however, it is good!
I had hoped that the story would move on tho :/ oh well!
dont take offense to this...this is constructive criticism! :D
cant wait for next update
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going i like i like you have to update soon i want to read more! ^_^
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"There standing in the doorway was Harry Potter.\" Draco turned to the wall and resumed his attempts to render himself unconscious. I like it, even if the idea has begun the same way before. Please continue.
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please update! I love Draco\'s mini mental breakdown! Please update soon!!
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful
just bloody fantastic
please update as soon as possible
just bloody fantastic
please update as soon as possible