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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. it had me sitting on the egde on my seat. i hope you update soon.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shouldn't Harry have talked to Lila about Hogwarts. thus meaning knowing everything about the founders and the important issues.
Thus harry could take all of the things from the vault and leaving it empty as bait for the final clash.
Also with the wards covering the forest should the Death Eaters be stunned when they arrive and thus enabling them to be questioned.
THANX
MERRY CHRISTMAS
Thus harry could take all of the things from the vault and leaving it empty as bait for the final clash.
Also with the wards covering the forest should the Death Eaters be stunned when they arrive and thus enabling them to be questioned.
THANX
MERRY CHRISTMAS
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying the story so far. I read the whole thing today and can't wair for another update. I saw that you mentioned things about your first story. Do you have another story posted somewhere else? Please let me know! Also, please email me when you get another chapter done if it wouldn't be too much trouble. Thanks! Stormy
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like your story so far, though I have to say your making Harry's side a little too all powerful. Everything is going their way and that's not life. But anyways I just wanted to pop in quickly for a minute to correct a mistake you made in chapter 6. For the honorifics on the names, it is -san not -son. And also for Harry because he is a lord, or royalty, his honorific would be -sama not -san. Anyways yea, that's all. Hope my review helps
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I rarely review, but here's to you........
I absolutely love it....
Mostest awesomest bestest story in the whole wide world... Trully...
Keep it up and gives us more please....
I absolutely love it....
Mostest awesomest bestest story in the whole wide world... Trully...
Keep it up and gives us more please....
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beyond awesome. I was so overcome with this story. cant wait to see where you go next. I am confused as how prince charles screwed up on the treaty though. Merry Christmas and happy new year. Kizuna
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I was very glad to find this story again, after it was deleted on ffn. I enjoyed this new update and I hope the next one will be slightly faster, but if you need to take that amount of time to maintain the quality then I don't hold it against you and I won't complain again.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, bye
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great to see that you've updates. i look forward to seeing more
Lucius Drache
Lucius Drache
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY an update - i adore this story i truely do the only problem i have is with continuity but with a story this size it's understandable, in this chapter (13a) you only mention one hermione while there is supposed to be two. i'm really intrested to see what's going to happen with the royal family and if the treaty will stand. And if the quidditch plan will work - Hope you update again soon with partB BTW do you still have your Yahoo group?