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for Coercion and Confusion

by roxierose13

schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm re-reading this fic cause I don't remember it very well and I'll review every chapter cause I don't remember which ones I reviewed and which ones I didn't. And just because I'm reading this doesn't mean I'm going to read every single other fic of yours over the next few days. I said I'd get around to them and I will, so stop pestering me about it or I won't. Anyways, this fic is starting to come back to me now, but I'm not gonna say anything. I liked this chapter a lot, although, I had forgotten how emo you made Harry... *rolls eyes* I'm off to read more.

~Kyle
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I remember this now, but I'm still gonna keep on re-reading it cause I just want to. LOL! Great chap, although I really don't like your depiction of Harry much in this fic. Draco is dead on, but Harry is way too indecisive and whiny...

~Kyle
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved that chapter. It was short, but loved it. Still didn't like Harry's portrayal, but I guess I'll just have to get past that...

~Kyle
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Draco is so jealous!!! *does a dance* Loved chapter 4. It was great!

~Kyle
person brandy
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story and so far I love it. I can't wait to read more.
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why am I even reading this? Now I remember that this is so a Dom!Draco fic because YOU are the author.... *grumbles* Harry is a little novist bitch and Draco is the experienced sex god and he is eventually going to fuck Harry's brains out. Harry will fall in love, Draco will deny his feelings and try to push Harry away, and then Harry will win him over in some act of sickeningly fluffy love. You're fics are all the same. I don't think I'm gonna finish reading this. It was good while it lasted, but you know how much I dislike fics when Harry is the sub. I might try to read some of those challenges you have. Ttyl.

~Kyle
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's really good! Its the second long Harry + Draco fic I've ever read, but I'm excited, I love these stories! You kept the characterization of each character really well, I can't wait for more! 'Hopefully SOON.
person Saigh
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
such a great story so far! very hot...please say you'll update soon!
person claire bear
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! awesome!
please update soon!
person moop7
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooomg...you just stopped! ::cry:: but once again awesome work as usual ^_^ i cant wait for the update! but really..why would draco think that harry and ron had a thing? ooo jealousy!! mk i'll stop trying to firgure out the story and wait for an update like a good reader =)