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for Coercion and Confusion

by roxierose13

person erotic*chaos
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wat a tease, it was so short! update soon, can't wait to see wat happens at midnight!
person liz
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought the present was cute.
person e.s.
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why would seamus upa and ask harry if he was gay just because harry said he was tired and was acting a little depressed. it just seems like you are conveniently jumping to whatever topic you want to talk about without a plausible story line leading up to it.
person Vibora
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooo! ^_^ hope draco gets on with it now
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read this fic ina while so I missed out on it getting good. However seeing as I had nothing better to do I decided to catch up on it and boy am I glad. That was amazing and I can't wait to see what happens next. Usually I don't like Harry so weak but Draco's attitude totally makes up for it. So update soon okay?
person Saigh
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I loved the verse! I'm glad Harry...appeared...to cotton on rather quickly

Some people take the idiocy line too far...
person Lola
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww sweet! I want a little playing lion...and a draco..that'd be good too...please update soon.
person anjellic
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG! Please update soon. This chapter was so nice. I didn't even mind the whole internal monologue because it was what I would have said! I don't know if I would have thrown Draco from figuring out he wanted more to sending him a love note but I'm interested to see what it really means. I'm probably assuming a little too much but I'm really anxious to see what you do with them next!!! Lots of love

Anjellic
person BirdieBlythe
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! I was so happy to see an update!! Do another one soon!!
person Amessis
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved that!