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for Coercion and Confusion

by roxierose13

person Moon_Shadow
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I love your story! Keep up a good work and update soon!
person Ajax
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm waiting for more!
person Reader
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I want more!
person Sorceress14
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it! Please, please update soon! This story is sooo hot! I love how draco is playing hard to get but I do wish that Blaise could have someone to be with to as that scene with his and Harry made me sweat a little *laughs like a giddy schoolgirl*. Oh and for this being an un-beta'd chapter, it was actually very well-written! I will be not-so-patiently waiting for your next chapter!
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 5! Draco got angry as Blaise talked about his encounter with Harry. That's good right? And then he kept Harry from falling. Can't wait for more!
person riddlestar
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! i loved this! you need to update soon~ please, if possible email me when you update, cuz i dont visit this site often. anyway, loved it!
person Vudu
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon I like this.
person Sezza
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**Jaw drops to the floor**

WHAT THE HELL?!

Draco's being NICE?

Hey, I can deal with it. LOL, poor little inncocent confused Harry.

MORE INTERACTION WITH THEM, PLEASE, I'M DYING HERE!

*chokes and dies*

Okay I am fine.

This is a good story, so keep writing!
person aimee
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don't care about this chapter not being beta'd, liked it just the same !
person angelstarfire
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually... you did a really good job. I'm a grammar nazi and I found nothing wrong with this when I read it... okay... I found like... one thing. But it wasn't that big a deal and I love this fic... I've been waiting for you to update and I'm very happy with this chapter. Keep it up! Ignore the beta! :P