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for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

by Ms_Figg

person firewall
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe it\'s finished! What a fascinating trilogy you have created. I know that this will be a selection I will come back and read again in the future. It brought me so much pleasure. Thank you very much for sharing your story and characters with us. You did nothing but get better and better. I especially was impressed with your chapter titles. I can\'t wait for your next story.
person Lyndie578
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hermione and Severus relationship is certainly getting messy. I\'ve just finished reading Albus\' \"word\" with Marcus. I have to leave off no, but am looking forward with great anticipation to reading about Hermione\'s decision and what happens next. Thanks for posting such a disturbing, but fun (I know, kind of twisted) story! I feel certain that after considering all the facts, that Hermione will make the correct decision for her.
person beeky63
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was wonderful, I\'m so sad it\'s over. So what\'s next? Severus learning to cope with a pregant wife and impending fatherhood, perhaps. Can\'t wait for your next story. YOU ROCK! (Did you know that!)
Toodles.
person angel
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i love the story i cant wait in till you next one and little marcus epilogue and in till next time keep upu the great work and later for now

angel
person Yabo
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So many people don\'t write realistic descriptive sex but you do it so well. Well done! Please tell me you will also be sticking with the SS/HG ship?
person Koda
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, great. This was a great story. ^.^ See you in your next fic.
person Hanna Delacour
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waiting patiently as possible... you know how much I love this fic. I\'m ready for more please?!
person Hypatia
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.27 ----

Oh my god! I need a cigarette, and I quit smoking 10 years ago!!!

Thanks for the delightful, artistic-beyond-prose ending to this story, Ms. Figg. I was afraid it was going to become sappy, but you answered the call and turned what might have been Harlequin fluff into righteous, satisfying, realistic porn smut. YOU RULE!!!!
person christina ballerina
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
jeez, you MUST write a story about marcus. he\'s too damn hot!!

I\'m amazed at how fast you are with writing by the way. Love your stories!
person Prince Demetri
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A typical pairing that I see. Through love and differences, the two over come great diversities and come to know one another. This is what I see in most the given Hermione/Snape stories, though yours is much better written. One might try a different pairing? You might bring to life another set of diversly different characters and bring them to these readers here, which have obviously become fans. It would be interesting to see if you could do this actually instead of just staying to typical pairings. It is just a suggestion and you certainly do not have to listen. That is the writers choice.

Huzzah and fare well

Prince Demetri