rate_review Reviews

Oh yeah! Bring on Marcus! Like JW says, not only would he make a great villian, but you could put him in his own stories. Can\'t wait to read more.

I don\'t know where your story is going either but I like it. I\'m looking forward to the next update...I think Severus is being underestimated by the DA professor...hehehehe.

Chapter 1 - Oh me, oh my, another bad boy. He sounds very intriguing. All kinds of interesting things can and do happen with your characters. Keep on writing!

Stormi

please update this as frequently as you\'ve updated your other works. i\'m absolutely positively addicted to every word you write.

looking forward to seeing where this is going

A most interesting character. I love it when Snape has a challenger. It always brings out the \"best\" in him. I can see the duel now...ummm. Yes, I think this is another excellent start. I\'ll be looking forward to it.

fantastic start. got me hooked already.

Oh Mrs Figg - you are just so prolific and such a good writer. I love your work but can\'t keep up! I haven\'t even started \"the up against the wall wars\" yet. Although I have bookmarked it as essential reading. Have you got a secret team of house-elf writers following you round all day, taking non-stop dictation? Or maybe just a quick-quotes quill that can be plugged into the USB port on your computer.

Yes - Marcus is just my type. We clearly need to know everything about what turns him on, motivates him and adds interest to his life. Why isn\'t he a death-eater? Does he believe in good and evil or just who picks up the tab? Has he got a big willy? (sorry - animal instincts got the better of me for a mo).

You keep writing, girl. It\'s what you\'re good at.

oooo v interesting

Ch 1 - whoa, what a great character! I\'m jealous of your ability to make an original character so highly defined and memorable in just the first short chapter. I don\'t think you necessarily need him for just the marriage story - he could be used in several plots. I wonder if Severus wasn\'t recruited for Eradicators because he had living relatives still, and if Marcus and Severus knew or heard of each other in school. Does Hermione still wear her charm bracelet and necklace? Marcus could be a sexy hot character, but we already have Severus for Hermione; and if Marcus turns out to be too evil, he might just need killing off. Hmm, keep Eli and Leaf Ear around, please! Next chapter?