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*nice* you do a good job of explaining inner motivations and drives. keep up the good work

Ch 2 - whee, the story begins!! Hmm, does Albus still have the map showing where S&H are? Do S&H pre-arrange their \"playdates\" or does he just jump her whenever? I could see Marcus jumping Hermione while in Polyjuice form, or in Death Eater garb, then seeing how long it takes for S&H to figure out what\'s happening. (Of course, if Marcus is really bad in the sack, Hermione will figure it out too soon!) Does Marcus take \"private jobs\" from folks who want enemies killed - Gringotts or private parties? Ooh, I can hardly wait to see what you do with this story!!

Ooh, I\'m liking it so far.

I love this story so much. It\'s entertaining and exciting. Could you e-mail me when the next chapter is writen?

Glad to have another chapter so quickly! I really do like dream symbolism, I know it\'s warned me as to coming \"dangers\" in the past. Lets hope Hermione finds her center before her world gets thrown off kilter. Update soon!

Ch 3 - ??? Is Hermione going into Trelawney mode? Whoa.... Sounds like Hermione may be tempted by Marcus. If I may go into Trelawney mode myself, I would guess that a threesome with Hermione, Severus, and Marcus would NOT go well - the boys might want to out-do each other, and Hermione would be in severe need of purple potion. Hmm, then again, that might be good.... no, bad... no, good.... I think I\'ll let Ms Figg figure that out!

I can\'t believe you\'ve gotten another chapter up so soon. Another great fanfic with a very interesting plot. -On tenterhooks for the next installment.

Chapter 2 - Sneaky, coniving, so and so. Severus is still on top of his game.

I don\'t believe that Hermione would stray (as she is very loyal) but I can see where helping others may get her in trouble this time.

Keep up the good work.

Chapter 3 - Oh my, the beginning of the chapter is awesome. Hermione\'s subconscious is trying to tell her something and now she will have to figure it out.

Seeing as both the Serpent and the Dragon bowed to her it seems to indicate that Marcus may fall in love with Hermione too.

Update soon, pleaseeeeee.

I love it! I was hoping that you would follow \"The up against the wall war\" quickly. Your new character intrigues me greatly. And I love a fic with a good romantic battle... so on with the show!