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Now why can\'t Dumbledore figure these things out before he hires the DADA teacher?? But Severus is really quick on the uptake and I can\'t wait to see what he does. If he is smart, he\'ll put a ring on her finger so fast that the rice can be used for dinner tonight! But that won\'t make much of a story. I am curious to see how Hermione reacts to someone else wanting her. And more importantly trying to get her. I would think it would be a bit flattering to her since she has never had that sort of thing before, but will Mr. Infinity be able to do more than turn her head?? But I guess the real test will be when she finds out what he is packing - - I mean come on, even if he is well above average, he probably can\'t compete with the Snake of Slytherin!

Ahhh...just what I needed. Another Ms_Figg story! Well, I have already commented on the whole character of marcus. Now, Severus doesn\'t like anyone, but Marcus was being overt about Hermione to Severus. I mean, he just flat out asked about her and Severus, I could only imagine, was on the verge of ripping his head off. I really do like how Severus is so possesive of her. And she has no idea. Now...the dream. I LOVED this! So much foreshadowing, it\'s scry. So this is hat is to come, is it? Poor Severus! How could hermione ever want anything more? But, Marcus kind of said it all, didn\'t he? In his little speech to himself after seeing them together. She is young and impreshionable. Oh...hermione will need all the help she can get! What an interesting character Marcus is...you have done a great job creating a wonderful, worthy, nemesis fr Severus Snape. Someone capable of taking his psychological B.S. and running him down with it. Wonderful. Well...enough babbling from me. I, as always, am looking for more.

Sounds interesting - just as long as Hermione does eventually end up marrying Severus I have no problem with this story - Severus is more vulnerable than people give him credit for!

Update soon please!

Ms Figg, you are awesome. I love all your stories. Keep em coming.

I liked how much time you spent in Severus\' head. It lays the foundation for his future actions that, I am sure, wil lead to results not normal for him. ie: hermione not being at his beck and call and him not being very happy about it. Can he possibly sink to new levels of snarkiness? No...certainly not? *lol* Well, congrats on your receptionist gig. Hope it goes well. But we prefer our favorite author to be unemployed and writing! *ROFL* (I am kidding...really I am)

that was great please write more i love it soooooooo please update soon and in till then keep up awesome work ... later for now

angel

I really like this one- I\'ve just read all your stories in 2 days (to the absolute displeasure to my physics teacher, who hasn\'t recieved any homework since...=) and I really enjoy them. You have a really well-developed vocabulary (even though I caught an \"irregardless\" somewhere along the line- \"irregardless\" is not a word!!), and your plot lines are perfect. Even work that you called PWP wasn\'t \"without plot\"... I love the new story, I hope you continue as magnificently as you have been!! You should write your own book...if these had been your own characters, etc., you probably could have published it as a romance/erotica novel...anywho, happy writing!

Ahh, your story is developing nicely. As usual, you don\'t rush your storyline and it makes all the difference in the world. Glad you got the work today, you never know from where your next inspiration will come.

Ch 4 - ooh, a cushy receptionist gig sounds like a nice way to spend the day and make some money. And you can still write at night! I don\'t mind \"only\" one chapter a day - with most other authors, we\'re fortunate if we get a chapter a week. As for this chapter, I do like what is in Severus\' mind. In Hermione\'s dream - did Marcus unconsciously send it to her? - both Severus and Marcus allowed her to choose between them, but she was afraid and ran. So if the dream is prophetic, that might mean that Marcus wants more than just a fling, or more than just breaking up S&H, which would really make him a serious choice for Hermione. Let\'s face it, the Eradicator background really is exciting and sexy! You\'re spoiling us with two hot men!!

Oh, this is going to be another excellent tale! It\'s also going to be difficult to read- I didn\'t like the fact that there would be a rival for Hermione; I like her and Severus ONLY, lol! I\'m sure there will be some good drama and angst and fights before they end up together- right?? :-)
Looking forward to more...
L