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for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

by Ms_Figg

person SteffieSnape
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.6 - Awwwwwww.....!!! That is so sad!!! Omg I really feel horribly for Severus! I never thought of him crying but I guess maybe he realized it\'s possible he could lose her. Wow..... that\'s very powerful. *snif snif* I feel very sad right now, I want to cry with him. Oh poor poor Snape *cries with him*
person anyah_daoc
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have spent the last few days devouring your stories, and I must say they have been fantastic. My husband also thanks you...lol. I look forward to learning what happens next. My suspense awaits...
person Jenn
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He is a very bad man....I am really goining to hate it when Snape transfigurers him. By accident, of course.
I wonder what he will look like as a smelly wart on the back of a goat?
person septentrion
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is going to be interesting. I can\'t wait to read the fight between Marcus and Severus. As far as Hermione choses Severus...
person JW
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - oh, he\'s good.... VERY good, very smooth, very tempting! I can\'t tell what is true and what isn\'t, but please don\'t do anything harmful to hurt those beautiful telescoping violet eyes! I\'m really wondering what he was like as an Eradicator hit-wizard - he seems so skilled that he could easily and quickly kill someone, but the way he\'s messing with Hermione (teasing her mind with visions of dinner and dancing, etc.) I wonder if he \"played\" with his victims before he killed them. He\'s also \"playing\" with Severus right now, which is dangerous because it could honk off Hermione. Ooh, this is such a great story!!
person angel
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ poor professor flitwick but that was every every funny though .... hmm i wonder what dumdledore is going to do with him and how is mone ..please update soon and in till then keep up the awesome work..later for now

angel
person anon
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong for me to request another chapter, even when you\'ve already posted today? :)
Positively addicted to everything you write.
keep it up!
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.7 - DOH! Don\'t stop there you meanie! ok, yu are not a meanie, it was all for effect! hehehehe! *strikes a pose* Anyways..... so he is quite tempermental eh? Wow, more so than Severus and that\'s saying something! Muahahahhaahha! I\'ve thought about it, and if Marucs keeps continuing the way he\'s progressing, then he will be too much like Hermione in ways for them to work out. So tra lala... it\'s SNAPE AND HERMIONE FOREVER! Yaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!! Wooooooooo! Well..... that\'s my wishes anyways, hahahaha! I know... I\'m a hopeless SS/HG fanatic, hahaha! I just can\'t help it, they are near perfect for each other, haha! Ok, I hope you update soon so we know how Hermione is. I imagine she is pretty shaken at seeing Severus cry. Awwwwww..... poor little lioness. Toodles!
person Miroku75
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Great chapter! While not lemony, Snape\'s response to the threat of losing Hermione seemed in character.
person angel
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man poor mione ..poor severus.... i hope she figures out what he mean soon and i hope then she will under stand why he felt like he had to clame her again like he did ...man poor poor severus ... in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

ps please update soon and thank you for the fast updates ~giggles ~