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Ooh, poor Sevvy is having jealousy issues..

Ch. 1 & 2 - WOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOO! I\'m so glad you are doing this story! YAY!!!! I was so excited to see it on your profile thingy! This new character is highly intriguing! I LOVE him all ready, haha! He\'s like Severus yet more.... hmmm..... open? HAHA! I love the idea of an ex=assassin. Brilliant, just brilliant! So we have a former Death Eater and Order member claiming wonderful juicy little Hermy to himself and a new mysterious black bird of night with Severus-esqu qualities and a more charming appeal taking interest and duking it out for wonderful juicy little Hermy\'s affection too?!!! TOTAL GENIUS! Gosh..... if I was a man I would marry you!!! HAHAHA! Excellent excellent excellent!! BRAVO! Ok, 2 more chapters still! Weeeeeeee! Toodles!

That was amusing - and it does bug me when people like something until they are told what it is!

Like snails etc

Great couple of chapters - I can\'t wait till the next one - I can\'t believe Severus cried... bless him!

Congratulations on the job. A good chapter, despite being lemonless. Why can I forsee a distinct lack of lemons on the horizon here? I get the feeling this story is going to have a lot to do with what\'s inside the characters\' heads. Not that I\'m complaining, all your stuff is good. Just promise us an \'explosive\' ending, okay?

that was intense...but necessary to the plot, I think. I\'m kind of wondering about Hermione, though. For a smart women, she\'s kind of slow on the uptake. I know she\'s inexperienced, but it doesn\'t take a rocket scientist to figure out what\'s going on here.

Very interesting.... well, I\'m definately on board for good! Please update again soon, can\'t get enough... I love a jealous Snape.

Oh wow...I am stunned. That was a little freaky when he threw her on the bed and didn\'t even give her a chance. But she of course loved it. But...poor Severus. In his own way, he knows that Hermione is too young to even understand all the things that he does. How touching your lemon turned out to be. I do wish Hermione would grow up alittle. Geesh....tell Severus he has to marry her! Argh...I see some confusion for Hermione, heart break for Severus and possible wet dreams for Marcus. Please keep going. I think you did a wonderful job on this emotional chapter. Sorry you aren\'t doing well right now. :o(

Muahahahahahahaha! It seems that Dumbledore doesn\'t quite trust this new black mystery either, eh? Well he shouldn\'t if this new black mystery is going to try and steal Hermione from Snape! Nooooooooooo! NEVER! I do hope you remember when you write this that it\'s a Snape/Granger fic, hehehehehehehe!!!! Meaning it\'s Snape and Hermy who live a long life together happily married with kids and awesome sex forever!!!! YAY! But this new character is quite tempting hmmm? It\'s like seeing chocolate when you are on a diet..... muahahahaha! But no one will ever be more choclatey than our main man Severus! Gosh.... no one will ever be quite a s delicious as him. *drools* I\'m just a die hard Snape lover, hahahaha.... hence I\'m married to him, haha! I\'m just letting Hermione borrow him for a while, hehehe! Errrr..... riiiiight. So when is the next chapter?! Weeeeeeee! Ok, Toodles!

Wow. And wow. I half thought Hermione was going to fight and run from Sev in that last scene. Very powerful. Get the lady some purple potion, please!

Bull Testicales?!?!?! Grooosssss! What a weirdo Marcus is! I really don\'t like him at all anymore! I think the dragon thing is super cool, the eyes and the ancestry, but what an arrogent ass! Ohhh...I hope Snape rips him a new one. But first, I hope DUmbledore puts him in his place! Arghhhh....