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Walking away now. Too much angst for me.

NOOO!!! Ms Figg, you\'re killin\' me, woman! Killin\' me! Killin\' the Killer K ! ! ! I am so happy you have decided to continue on! And even though you are K I L L I N G me I am loving this new twist in their relationship! Poor Severus! I can\'t help feeling sorry for the big dumb lug! But that was no way to treat poor Hermoine either! I just feel for them both! My heart just breaks for them!That is a real testiment to your great writing to stir such heartfelt emotion! Please update soon, I , like many other readers, I\'m sure, can\'t get enough of your teriffic gift! Happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Torn,
Killer K :{

Way to go....that was an amazing thing you made Hermione do....I am so glad that she stood her ground. I can\'t say that I am not cheering for Marcus after the rape. I like him and it would be interesting to see him end up with Hermione .

That was hilarious... I have to say I had an undignified snort at poor Flitwick\'s expense over that one. Continue!

~sniff sniff~ man severus you just make his job easier man i cant wait in till the next chapter soooo on till next time keep up the awesome work later

angel

Ch.10 - Wow, very dramatic. I LOVE IT! You know, at first I was really worried you were going to ive thema time out or a break, but actually I\'m very glad you did now. It will give them both time to think and really understand what it is they want. Severus is going ot have to grow up and learn to open up his heart to her if he ever wants to make their relationship last forever. Communication is key yo every relationship, and I\'m o glad you are using that as a main point here. A lot of SS/GH stories just put them together because they are both intelligent and they always have great sex, but they always leave out the part that they need to communicate intimately with their hearts, not just their bodies, to make it work. I am so glad you are getting them through this stage. It will be a struggle for them, but in the end it will be for the better. They will be closer than anything, and more in love undoubtedly.

And Severus DOES know Hermione better than Marcus, and he will have no problem getting her back after she has her fling with Marcus..... because he really knows what her heart wants. Marcus only wants the hunt, as you said, and that is not going to please Hermy at all, in my opinion anyways. Sigh.... I am so glad you made them split up for now, it will really do them good in the end. Just don\'t mke it tooooooo long ok?! hahahahaha! I gotta have my Snapey and Hermy, hehehehe! Thanks for this wonderful story! Toodles!

Oh yeah.... update soon again please!!!!!! muahahahahahahaha! I\'m addicted.... *runs around in circles*

I really think you have Hermione doing the right thing as she sees it, and you have already shown that Severus realises he is wrong and needs to make amends. Just how much trouble and pain will you have Marcus cause them, I wonder?

Chapter 10 - Good for Hermione. Hopefully, Severus will learn to grow with this and Marcus won\'t be able to weedle his way in. Nice chapter and am looking forward to the next.

Stormi

Another great chapter... glad to see some of the mindset of Severus again. I really enjoyed your part about paradise, which I have to agree is true. People get bored with perfect bliss. For some reason humans tend to need a little chaos in their lives to know they are still living. Can\'t wait for the update!

Ch.9 - Oh wow, what an arrogant bastard he is! Sheesh! Well now I have more faith in Snape and Hermione, because Hermione will see this side to Marcus and realize he doesn\'t love her like Severus does. Even as brutal as Snape and Hermione can be \"together\" Snape still loves her. He does it because he loves her. Basically, Marcus just wants some ass, hahahahaha, and he wants to prove he can take on anyone and get his prize. Arrogance always fails in the end, it makes people blind. Even a great creature like a Dragon can be fooled by the sly coil of a snale, muahahahaha! Snape may be arrogant in some ways, but he has his reasons. He has never been respected as much as he should be, and he\'s finally starting to lead a normal life with his perfect lover. He won\'t let anyone take that away from him, that\'s where his arrogance is... the right kind.... because he loves her.

Well I hope I\'m right about all this because I\'d be very upset if Snape and Hermione don\'t end up together, or their relationship is damaged horribly because of this pompous Dragon. I would love to see them duel it out too, so I hope you put that scene in. It would be very entertaining I\'d have to say! muahahahahahaha! And I love it how Dumbledore sticks up for Snapey, hehehehe! Ahhh... I just love it! Wow, I really AM a hopeless Severus fan! hahaha! MAn o man, I wish I had him all to myself. Oh well... I hope you update again! I envy how you update so fast. It takes me a while, blah! Toodles!