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Ch.14 - Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I love it! That\'s all I can say! I FREAKIN LOVE IT!!!!! It was perfect, just as I imagined!!!! Oh, and the part with hermione too at the end...... also perfect!!! It willmake the struggle to get her back all the more difficult! Woooooooooo hooooooooooooooo! I hope you update again soon! Toodles!

You know I tink that this is good for Hermione to stretch her legs a bit but I really want to scratch that man\'s violet eyes right out of his head!!!

Very interesting indeed. This could be a monumental duel and I really can\'t say who would win. Marcus is a very smarmy character. There must have been some innate goodness in him if he refused to take the contract to assassinate Dumbledore but I don\'t see him respecting anyone right now and that includes Hermione. In many ways he would have been a consummate Deatheater, he is remorseless, sociopathic.

It will be interesting as well to see if Severus begins to treat Hermione with some softness when they have worked their way through their current estrangement. I know that Hermione feels she needs the roughness but does she need the brutality? It will be interesting to watch this story develop.

My thoughts? Marcus is a douche. Sev acted how Sev is..well.. supposed to act, but Hermione obviously is sick of that. :\\

Women take back men who beat them and abuse them more often than you think. Sometimes these men get help or change, sometimes they don\'t. There is love between Severus and Hermione and love is powerful, it can supersede a lot of things. This is the way she chooses to handle it. It\'s a decision women in the real world have made as well. Oftimes not the wisest choice, but there it is.

Wow!!! WHAT a chapter!

I\'m a bit concerned that Hermione wanting to willingly fuck Marcus might make her seem a bit out of character with her intellect, however. No doubt the illustrious Ms. Figg has tricks up her literary sleeves to get around that.

And of course we\'re all waiting on tenterhooks to discover the mysterious reason why these two haven\'t jumped the broom together yet!

oooh...the suspense is killing me.
*GO* team Snape!

Ch 12-13 - ooh, very interesting indeed! I like the idea of Hermione doing a bit to try to rile up Severus, so that\'s not just a passive observer of Severus-Marcus interaction. Also, she\'s the one with the dream of the dragon-serpent fight, so she has a vested interest in preventing warfare between the two. But Marcus is pretty \"Slytherin\" too, even though he didn\'t go to Hogwarts. VERY interesting character you\'ve created!!

aaargh! will this tension ever stop?
i can\'t get enough.
i feel somewhat ah...*responsible* to warn marcus who he is dealing with.
-ooh, when will severus find out about marcus\'s dubious past?
post soon.

well, well, well...that was quite a confrontation hey?
is it wrong for me to want severus to break his promise to hermione and duel marcus to the death?
even though the tension is killing me, i really want you to draw this one out.
fantastically written as always.