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Great story. Saw your posting on WIKTT and have read everything you listed here. Love the dynamic you\'ve created between Hermione and Severus. I wonder if Marcus will stay as detached as he currently is, given Hermione\'s dream. Love, love, love your version of Sex-God-Severus.

man i dont knkow if having drinks with him would be a good think he cant find thing out about mione and use them ..... i wonder if mione has been thing of her dream she had .... well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

I wonder if Marcus will insinuate that his \"relationship\" with Hermione has progressed farther than it really has. And will Severus know that he\'s bluffing?

Any chance for some lemons in future chapters? If not, oh well...this story is worth it, regardlesss.

Oh, they\'re all so calculating! This is really an excellent story; or should I say *another* excellent story! I\'m looking forward to the snake and the dragon facing off. Really well done. I see Severus rescuing Hermione in the near future...or maybe he\'ll have to rescue Marcus from her once his intentions are clear!
Do you have anything published, MsFigg? I\'d love to read more of your work- you really are good.
L

Very, very interesting indeed.. can\'t wait.

wow ..... i wonder how long it will take mione to figuer (sorry i have bbd spelling forgive me ) what marcus is up to in time ... and hope mione and severus get back togethere soon i dont like to see him hurtting like this ...... well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

I\'m sorry I know you plan to put Hermione and Severus back together, but I can\'t help seeing the rape overs and over again. In real life would a woman be able to take back a lover that raped her ever again? I don\'t think so...I think you ruined the chances of putting them back together by having him rape her and then leave her on the stone floor. If he had been remorseful after it happened or stopped himself in the middle then maybe I can see her eventually forgiving him, but the
way he left her was just ugly and something that a common thug would of done to a whore.

Don\'t worry, Bronte, even though Hermione and Severus are on the outs, I have figured out a way to insert at least partial lemons to quench the thirsty...in a couple more chapters

This is really going to be interesting because the two wizards have excellent insight into each other\'s psyche. However, I think Severus has a greater understanding of Marcus. Marcus underestimates Severus greatly while Severus seems to have Marcus pegged right down to the nth degree. Very nicely written.

I have read all your stories so far, they are terrific. Wish I could write half as good as you.

Thank you for sharing your stories.

Nancy