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Oh man Severus is not going to be a happy camper and boy is Hermione going to have to kiss some serious butt to make this up to him, I really hope Severus does. Update again really soon.

Ch 17-18 - uh-oh..... no wands.... but Marcus\' friend is the bouncer, so he could get Marcus out of there? Marcus could just go back to those three Muggle women, or he could choose the danger of fighting Severus; as naughty as Marcus is, I\'d rather see him shagging those three women than getting killed or castrated!

I really like your storries, especially that which belong to \'A Matter of Matrimony\'. I like how you portray Severus, it\'s a lot how I imagine his character and actions. I like the turn this series of storries took. First when I read \'What was I thinking - Part I\' I thought, \"Well, okay it\'s a PWP\" and I only read it, when the second part appeared. Suddenly it started developping a back-story, although there was still a lot of sex. But \'A Matter of Matrimony\' is great. The new character gives it so much more depth... and Snape\'s revelation in chapter 16 made me cry, well almost...

P.s. It\'s great that you are so fast with your updates.

FOUL! Oh, you\'re so bad you\'re good. I\'ll do anything I have to do, I\'ll say anything I have to say...just to get you to KEEP WRITING! Call it a thanksgiving gift, just give us the next chapter! (And the one after that, and the one after that...)

I love you.

I love you for writing this fic.

I love my Professor for giving me homework that i didn\'t bother doing because i was surfing this site which eventually led me to this story.

I love myself for reading it.

Honestly, you\'re a brilliant author and i enjoy all your stories. This is just the first one i\'ve ever actually reviewed. ^^;

Keep it up.

I LOVE your stories. Keep it up! :)

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From one cliffhanger expert to another: bravo darling

Ch 15 - I was getting upset at the idea of Severus waiting WEEKS to ask Hermione on a date, until you said it was all part of his plan - a RISKY plan, but a sneaky plan, \'cuz Marcus hasn\'t seen her with Ron and Harry. And Marcus had time to ask her on a romantic date too, so it\'s partly his fault that she\'s feeling less romantic about him. I wonder how this date with S&H will turn out; dinner in his rooms doesn\'t sound romantic, unless he decorates or does something really special. Hmm..... where\'s the next chapter??

Still reading, still hooked and love the way you portray Hermione, Severus and now Marcus. Just one thing - I\'m assuming you\'re American, because anyone in the UK knows cider is made with fermented apple. It\'s usually more alcoholic than beer, can be much more alcholic than wine, and is drunk by the pint. Try http://www.farm-shop.co.uk/ and click on Cider & Perry Collection for details (I like this place, I tried 10 different ciders and 6 perrys in a thimble sized cup, and nearly staggered out of the shed :D)

Here I am again! WOW! Severus is gonna smear Marcus across the floor of the grimy Hogwarts dungeons. Marcus is quite an ass at times, but not in the way that Snape can be... both are in the wrong. Quite frankly I hope Hermione stomps both thier asses!