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Ch.15 - *rubs hands together* muahahahahahahahahaha!

Ch 16 - ?????? Why did she run away??? He just poured out every emotion he had, and then she runs out? (Ahem... and she didn\'t even have her chocolate dessert! Which just tells you where MY mind would be.) Is it because \"on principle\" she doesn\'t want to give in too easily to Severus? And will she still go out flying with Marcus? Sure you can\'t find a dragon-lady for Marcus? BTW, love that Eli!

holy ... what is going to happen now i hope mione will not get mad with severus for saveing her ... please more more and it till then keep upthe awesome work and later for now

angel

Ms Figg, you break my heart then put it back together all to piss me off. That sentence may only make sense to me. I sense an ass kicking for Marcus. The only question is, who will be the ass kicker, Severus or Hermione.

Whoa! you are as demanding as Hermione!! hahahaha Great chapter...that girl had better learn to watch her drink. Talk about a low tolerance. I loved Severus\'s assertion that he was dangerous as well. Oh yeah.

More more...there I can be demanding too. : )

wow! i never thought Severus could be that eloquent... he really is trying hard to express his feelings... wow... n i wonder what Eli\'s role will be? n what marcus\' plans are? keep up the great job! :D

Oh no! It was going so well! I can see it now: Severus is going to hear that Hermione and Marcus are going on a date, and he\'ll guard himself even more and think that Hermione doesn\'t care for him. Meanwhile, Marcus will convince Hermione to drink wine, she\'ll do something she\'ll regret and barely remember, but she\'ll tell what she DOES remember to Severus, and they\'re reunion will be delayed yet again!

Or, alternatively, maybe Marcus will only *try* to convince Hermione to do something she would regret, but she\'ll resist, and he\'ll become violent. And Severus might come to the rescue?

I realize that I\'m most likely 95% wrong about what I think might happen, but it\'s fun to think about. I love this story!

Ch.16 - *heart stops* Gods...... I thought he was practically going to propose to her right there! Wow! I suppose once he started opening his heart it all just spilled out like a shaken up bottle of champaigne! Sheesh! I was nearly in tears..... excellent..... brilliant..... wonderful. Oh dear, they love each other somuch it\'s beautiful *snif snif tear sob*

yay! they\'re back together again! i really hope Marcus doesn\'t rape her, though...

loved all of your other storys. keep up the good work.can\'t wait till the next chapter.