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for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

by Ms_Figg

person Darque Hart
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gads! I feel like I\'ve been raked over the coals in these last few chapters.

Marcus -- How I HATE him. I am an extremely avid SS/HG fan, and this guy is just an abomination. He\'s rude, he\'s scary, he\'s threatened Severus! But, I\'ll give you this... he\'s a great storyline catalyst! [Damn bastard.]

Masochist that I am [er, not like HG] I\'m looking forward to the next chapters.
person Hanna Delacour
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, as always... that was alot of emotion for Severus, but I think he spoke eloquently and knowing Hermione\'s big heart, she won\'t be able to stay away for much longer. Well I\'m off to work, but I do hope for more upon my return ;)
person firewall
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yahoo! Go Severus go! I liked that better than a wizard duel...the latter would have been too final, someone would have had to die. Hermione needs to smarten up with the booze though. If she is reaching the point where she loses cognizance of her surroundings and partner, she has a real problem.

So I\'m sitting here wondering if the DADA curse is still in effect and Albus needs to find a new professor or will Marcus turn his dragon gaze to the three lovely muggles?
person Jenn
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YESSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kick His ASS!!!!!
person JTBJAB
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT.... is so incredibly mean.... I mean.... that was soooooo hot.... and then.... bam it ended.... glad it did.... but you need to update soon! Please please please please please!
person Jenn
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is got to be one of my favorites ontheis site. Excellent. And you update continuously!!!
But, you evil evil little thing!!! Evil Cliffie!!! Not right!
After he finally opens up and tell her what she has wanted to her, she bolts??!?!?!?!?!?!!?
And is Marcus goning to try and rape for real? I think he might. And Hermione should kill him if that is the
case. I just hope Serverus\'s revelation hasn\'t caused her to run right into MArcus\'s waiting arms, which it
has, but does she really feel anything?

We will see?
person Megan
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay Severus!!! A beautiful speech.
person anon
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaargh...i can\'t stop checking for updates. your fantastic story is ruining my life!!! :)

gosh, what to say about severus and hermione? that sure is one complicated relationship.
-although i wouldn\'t expect anything less from the snarky pootions master.

i really, REALLY want severus to duel with marcus. *please* let them duel...(you write action scenes so well)
great chapter and a perfect date, thanks for not taking the easy way out and making them go to bed straight away. -makes the lemons all the more worthwhile if you have to wait for them.
person firewall
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW when that wizard spills his guts, he spills his guts. Too bad he hadn\'t done that earlier in their relationship because he has now overwhelmed Hermione in much the same way that she overwhelmed him when she declared her love for him. You wrote that very well and very convincingly.

Gotta love Eli and his elvin powers.
person Anguloce
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww i love Eli! so sweet to look after his Master, especially one with as little experience in love as Severus. keep up the awesome work, you have yet to dissapoint me:)