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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.18 - OH............ MY............ GOD!!!! OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints*
How on earth could you stop there?!!!!!!!!!! That\'s it! I\'m calling the FBI and having you tracked right this instant! Muahahahahahaha!
Ok, not really, but that was bloody brilliant!!!!! Seriously, Marcus is a dead, dead, dead dead dead dead man! Woooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!! Evil evil eviiiiiiiiiiiillllll cliffie!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! IT WAS FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!!
Ok, so the interaction was perfect! I got goosebumps again because Marcu, yet again , reminded me of my creepo ex! GAH! I hope Severus pains him horribly! HA! It\'s so funny Marcus is the DADA teacher because you know it\'s cursed, muahahahahahaha! Even if Voldie is dead... WOOT! hahahahahahhahaha!!!!
Oh and yes, I loved the fact that Snape is considering children. Remeber?!!! I asked you before if they would ever have kids! YAY! I hope they get married, travel and have lots and lots of little Snape and Hermione\'s! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!
Ok, now back to this CLIFFIE!!! GAH! Please update soon! I want to see this duel and I want to see it BAD BAD BAD!!!!! Bad boy bad boy! Watcha gonna do? Watcha gonna DO? Watcha gonna do when Snape comes for youuuuuuuuuuuuuu! *sings stupid COPS song* Muahahahahahahahahaha!!! Alrighty, awesome chapter as always! UPDATE SOON OR I SHALL TURN INTO A MUTANT MARSHMALLOW AND DEVOUR YOU!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Funny, how you could just eat the marshmallow and end up killing me instead, hahahahaha! Wow, I\'m soooooooooo giidy rightnow it\'s not even funny. I think Marcus must have slipped me some of that wine too! Woooooooooooo! Toodles!
How on earth could you stop there?!!!!!!!!!! That\'s it! I\'m calling the FBI and having you tracked right this instant! Muahahahahahaha!
Ok, not really, but that was bloody brilliant!!!!! Seriously, Marcus is a dead, dead, dead dead dead dead man! Woooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!! Evil evil eviiiiiiiiiiiillllll cliffie!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! IT WAS FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!!
Ok, so the interaction was perfect! I got goosebumps again because Marcu, yet again , reminded me of my creepo ex! GAH! I hope Severus pains him horribly! HA! It\'s so funny Marcus is the DADA teacher because you know it\'s cursed, muahahahahahaha! Even if Voldie is dead... WOOT! hahahahahahhahaha!!!!
Oh and yes, I loved the fact that Snape is considering children. Remeber?!!! I asked you before if they would ever have kids! YAY! I hope they get married, travel and have lots and lots of little Snape and Hermione\'s! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!
Ok, now back to this CLIFFIE!!! GAH! Please update soon! I want to see this duel and I want to see it BAD BAD BAD!!!!! Bad boy bad boy! Watcha gonna do? Watcha gonna DO? Watcha gonna do when Snape comes for youuuuuuuuuuuuuu! *sings stupid COPS song* Muahahahahahahahahaha!!! Alrighty, awesome chapter as always! UPDATE SOON OR I SHALL TURN INTO A MUTANT MARSHMALLOW AND DEVOUR YOU!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Funny, how you could just eat the marshmallow and end up killing me instead, hahahahaha! Wow, I\'m soooooooooo giidy rightnow it\'s not even funny. I think Marcus must have slipped me some of that wine too! Woooooooooooo! Toodles!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story- I\'m loving it. And it\'s great how you\'ve got your readers craving a bunch of contrary things at once; we want to see Hermione with Marcus, but we want Marcus to get screwed out of everything, and we want Sev and Hermione back together (in all the ways!)...and now you\'ve got us fearing and salivating for the moment Mr.Delaluci tries to \'get his peice\'. Why do I suddenly feel that Hermione should dress for dancing and include her anti-deatheater bracelet? Can\'t wait for the next chapters- good writing!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FRIGGIN A!!!! YOU EVIL EVIL WOMAN, YOU!!!! Im so excited to see that there is another man interested in Hermione. A damn threesome would be so hot, but *shrugs her shoulders* not everyone is into that type of thing. Marcus is just so fliggingly hot. Yes I know, I said flinggingly. It must be the dragon thing... :)
Maureen
Maureen
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*YAY*
go team severus!!!
go team severus!!!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18 - Wow. Evil, evil cliffie. Can\'t wait to see what happens when between Severus and Marcus, and Severus and Hermione. Severus was definitely on the mark telling her not to drink with anyone but him.
And your earlier reviewers were right. I\'d read a Marcus based fan fiction. Watching him deal with falling in love, would be wonderful. If, Severus and Hermione leave him alive and whole for a sequel.
And your earlier reviewers were right. I\'d read a Marcus based fan fiction. Watching him deal with falling in love, would be wonderful. If, Severus and Hermione leave him alive and whole for a sequel.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I\'m happy that\'s all been settled. Now how will Hermione react? I\'ve been enjoying your writing immensely; please continue to update!
GM
GM
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dinner hey? interesting choice on severus\'s behalf. i wonder how stilted the table conversation will be?
you\'ve made me loathe marcus, and i know how difficult it is to write a character like marcus without making them appear annoying.
your pace is also really consistent; not to mention your remarkably frequent postings.
can\'t wait for the next chapter.
you\'ve made me loathe marcus, and i know how difficult it is to write a character like marcus without making them appear annoying.
your pace is also really consistent; not to mention your remarkably frequent postings.
can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW love the fight, wish it could have been done w/ magic, but this is diff. I love this fic, do update ASAP or NOW!!! LOL :D
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.19 - HOLY FUCKING BRILLIANT!!!!! *speechless*
I was HOPING AGAINST HOPE that you would make it a real fight, a lw down and dirty hands on fight! HOLY SHIT THAT WAS BAD ASS!!!!! OMG Snape was fucking brutal! I LOVE IT! Oh man, my favorite part was that irst punch Snape layed into Marcus!!! I reread it a few times and I actually screamed out YES the first time! My mom thinks I\'m nutz now but I dont give a flying poo!!!! AWESOMENESS IS ALL I CAN SAY!!!!! YOU ROCK! SERIOUSLY!!!! YOU= AWESOME!
I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! YEE HAW! Gods...... if it is possible....... you just made Severus Snape even more sexy than ever before! MUAHAHAHAHA! Toodles! ANXIOUSLY AWAITING!!!!!
I was HOPING AGAINST HOPE that you would make it a real fight, a lw down and dirty hands on fight! HOLY SHIT THAT WAS BAD ASS!!!!! OMG Snape was fucking brutal! I LOVE IT! Oh man, my favorite part was that irst punch Snape layed into Marcus!!! I reread it a few times and I actually screamed out YES the first time! My mom thinks I\'m nutz now but I dont give a flying poo!!!! AWESOMENESS IS ALL I CAN SAY!!!!! YOU ROCK! SERIOUSLY!!!! YOU= AWESOME!
I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! YEE HAW! Gods...... if it is possible....... you just made Severus Snape even more sexy than ever before! MUAHAHAHAHA! Toodles! ANXIOUSLY AWAITING!!!!!