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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PS re Ch 23 - wait, she gets BOTH rings? The intertwined serpents and the one with the big diamong? So what does Severus get - better be a nice one!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.24 - Ahhhh lovely lovely lovely! Just lovely! It\'s all I can say, lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely! hahahahahaha! Ok, seriously though, I can only imagine how beautiful the wedding is going to be, and the love-making, not fucking, but love-making will be after. I do hope that at least once wou allow them to have a slow passionate love-making corale, like Snape mentioned he wanted before nto too long ago. They can always go back to their fast and furious wild abandon sex later, muahahahahaha! It is there wedding after all.... and slow loverly loverly passionate sex is so pleasing too and if not more pleasurable in ways. Ahhh... it will show Hermione his true gentleness. Muahahahahhaha! Well, this is just my wishing here, don\'t feel forced to oblige *hopes prays and wishes with all my might* Well I can\'t wait to see how this ends. Oh, I do hope they have kids some day. Not too soon, however, they can still take time to travel, woot! But kids are sooooooo much fun! Ahhhh! Weeeeeeeeee! Well again that\'s me wishing. They woould have a pile of intelligent kids, eh? Too intelligent maybe, haha! Toodles!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Someone should give you a medal. You have basically become the authority on Hermione/Severus stories. For your next one, you should do a prequel - when they first started lusting after each other :)
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow nice punch mione ... now snape get up make up a nice dinner for mione and ask her to marry you ...ok .. well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm...nice fight scene.
post again soon
post again soon
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.22 - YOU GET HIM HERMIONE!!!! LET THE MOTHER FUCKER HAVE IT GOOD!
Ooooooooooohhh.... thank you for giving him a seconf blow!!! Oh man, that was freakin awesome! I laughed evilly aloud when she popped him in the nose again! Next, have her kick him in the balls and then shrink his package to nothingness permanently! He\'ll want to die! DING DING THE PERV IS DEAD!!!!! lmao!
OMG! OMG! OMG!!! He\'s going to propse?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! *shrieks like a little girl and runs around in circles* OMG!!!!!!! YOU EVIL PERSON HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs*
Ok, you aren\'t evil but oh my fucking gawd!!!! lol!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I\'m dying with anticipation!!! AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I hope it will be beautiful!!! AHHHHHH! I\'m so excited!!! Wow... I feel like one of my friends is getting married or something! hahahahaha! HURRY! Toodles!
Ooooooooooohhh.... thank you for giving him a seconf blow!!! Oh man, that was freakin awesome! I laughed evilly aloud when she popped him in the nose again! Next, have her kick him in the balls and then shrink his package to nothingness permanently! He\'ll want to die! DING DING THE PERV IS DEAD!!!!! lmao!
OMG! OMG! OMG!!! He\'s going to propse?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! *shrieks like a little girl and runs around in circles* OMG!!!!!!! YOU EVIL PERSON HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs*
Ok, you aren\'t evil but oh my fucking gawd!!!! lol!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I\'m dying with anticipation!!! AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I hope it will be beautiful!!! AHHHHHH! I\'m so excited!!! Wow... I feel like one of my friends is getting married or something! hahahahaha! HURRY! Toodles!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very satisfying! I just wish Marcus had come out of it worse...:-)
Looks like an engagement is on the horizon unless Hermione takes what Marcus said too seriously. Very well done- can\'t wait for more!
L
Looks like an engagement is on the horizon unless Hermione takes what Marcus said too seriously. Very well done- can\'t wait for more!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 20 - she\'s going to confront Marcus? Before he even gets healed up? What, she\'s not friends with him anymore?! He didn\'t know what would happen when she got drunk - but boy did he learn quick.... Will Albus keep him on staff? Where else would a former Eradicator go to?
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man he is sooooooooooooo going to get it again please more and in till then keep up the awesome work ..later for now
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well of course I\'ll review.
I\'m glad that Hermione finally had to face her weaknesses. Her drinking is something she needed to confront and deal with. Some people just can\'t drink *wine in her case* and it\'s time for her to deal with it. I was also glad that you didn\'t allow her to think that the potential rape was her just due. You are correct; it was not. Marcus had no right to accept that she was willing with that amount of drink in her...especially since he encouraged it.
I found it interesting the way she cared for Severus. It was a reversal of roles. Usually he is caring for Hermione after inflicting the pain. An interesting relationship for sure. I was glad to see that he could show her softness in this last chapter 21. This was something I had been waiting for because it fleshes out their relationship. As much as I loved their encounters, the relationship itself seemed one-dimensional to me. Severus has made the transition: he shared so eloquently his feelings and he has cared for her so touchingly; now, Hermione needs to step up and do her part.
On a purely personal level, I hope she breaks Marcus\'s nose again. heehee
BTW, have you considered the suggestion made by others here and are you going to write a Marcus story. I would read it for sure. The Ministry successfully eradicated *I couldn\'t resist* his humanity, it would be interesting seeing if he could replace it. I hope you let us know if you do. Also please don\'t forget your Snape/Granger pairings, you write them too well.
Anyway, kudos to you and please carry on. I love it.
I\'m glad that Hermione finally had to face her weaknesses. Her drinking is something she needed to confront and deal with. Some people just can\'t drink *wine in her case* and it\'s time for her to deal with it. I was also glad that you didn\'t allow her to think that the potential rape was her just due. You are correct; it was not. Marcus had no right to accept that she was willing with that amount of drink in her...especially since he encouraged it.
I found it interesting the way she cared for Severus. It was a reversal of roles. Usually he is caring for Hermione after inflicting the pain. An interesting relationship for sure. I was glad to see that he could show her softness in this last chapter 21. This was something I had been waiting for because it fleshes out their relationship. As much as I loved their encounters, the relationship itself seemed one-dimensional to me. Severus has made the transition: he shared so eloquently his feelings and he has cared for her so touchingly; now, Hermione needs to step up and do her part.
On a purely personal level, I hope she breaks Marcus\'s nose again. heehee
BTW, have you considered the suggestion made by others here and are you going to write a Marcus story. I would read it for sure. The Ministry successfully eradicated *I couldn\'t resist* his humanity, it would be interesting seeing if he could replace it. I hope you let us know if you do. Also please don\'t forget your Snape/Granger pairings, you write them too well.
Anyway, kudos to you and please carry on. I love it.