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Ahhh... the beauty of fanfiction. No man I\'ve personally ever met would speak that eloquently, but oh don\'t I wish. 1,000 points to Severus, Marcus 0000. Can\'t wait for more! Came home early just to read :D

Wow! You\'ve rounded out their relationship beautifully. They have the softness they\'ll need to get them through the years and yet they\'ll have their own brand of rough passion as well. Beautifully executed, Ms. Figg. >rubs hands together< all right let\'s get to the lemons.

woohoo! That was beautiful!
Oh, I want more chapters now -- I\'m so greedy!

They should have mad, passionate sex and then immediately floo Albus to marry them right now and then show up at the next evening\'s meal with the rings on her finger and Dumbledore announcing their marriage! Or all of the above but now showing up for the meal but to leave for a honeymoon week far away from creepy!Marcus.

More more more more more more more more more more

hors d\'ouevre

*snork*\'I had a relapse.\'! Ooops, woke the baby with that one.

Boy...Severus went all soft on us! See what love can do to a person....where did our snarky potions master go? *lol* Well, he did do a great job of taking care of her while she was down. The proposal was indeed great. I was so proud of Severus for saying everything in his heart without hestitation. But Hermione...does she really want to marry him? I mean, she said yes by saying, \"If that\'s what you want Severus.\". Hmmm....Not really the answer I would give. Nor would that have flown with my husband. Anywhooo...had to look away from the screeen and laugh when he was busted whaking off in the bathroom. Oh that was funny. Made even funnier that he was so embarresed. That is precious. So I assume you are covering the wedding and the honeymoon lemons? Kind of hot over here. Need something to drink....prefer lemonade...please...hurry...so...thirtsy...

yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that was sooooooooooooo beautifully im glad she said yes and now marcus can leave her alone please more more and in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

Ch.23 - *snif snif tear sob*

CH 23 - oh, that was absolutely pretty! Such wonderful words from Severus, and a great story for the rings\' history. I can\'t imagine why Hermione would want to run from a proposal like that - somebody put a chain around her feet! She has been running too much in this story, silly girl. Spank her!

Ch 25 - poor house-elves! Hermione better make things up to them later - have a party at Snape Manor or something. Very nice touch to have Eli be the ring-bearer. So there were other Eradicators at the wedding - I\'m guessing S&H don\'t know some of their friends\' histories. Interesting.... Very brave of Marcus to come to the wedding, but I\'m glad he did; better for S&H to start their married lives without a new enemy. Thanks for posting!