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for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

by Ms_Figg

person Lyndie578
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just finished chapter 1, though you\'ve posted many beyond, but I had to stop and comment on your excellent Original Character! I think he\'s going to give Severus a run for his money! How lovely; what a challenge. I cannot wait to read more!
person angel
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it it is soooooooooooo romantic please more more and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person Laura
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, bravo! That was great! I loved that they \'abstained\' and that he took her to the cabin. Awwww! I hope there\'ll be more...I\'d like to see him thank Marcus for his help in finally making Hermione his wife, hehe!
L
person pinkbubbles
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i love your story sooo much! please dont stop writing!!!!! ew and kill off that nasty son-of-a-&*!#@ ASAP! ohhhhhhh and a wedding...yay wedding! Eli will be SO pleased!! i wonder if Hermione will still be \"Master\'s Secret\".
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.25 - Oohh so sweet!!!!! Goodness, he is soooo darned romantic it makes my heart throb, gah! It was beautiful! I really do hope they will make slow, passionate, beautiful love this time. They need to experience it that way at least once, pleeeeeeeeaaaaassssse?! lol! Can\'t wait for the next part! Toodles!
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it !!!
person anon
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY *lemons...*
person JTBJAB
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, it was cute and held great symbolism... brilliant! And I love how Severus couldn\'t hear what Albus was saying because he was so wrapped up in Hermione\'s eyes... beautiful.

I look forward to your next update!
person Starfyre
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, I wish my story could generate this many reviews.
person PurestBlood
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this, this fic is the best I have seen in a along time, I am just gonna be sad when this is over*sigh* I love Sev\'s confession of love and devotion, beautiful...Yay next chapi we get lemons (^.^) Update soon I\'ll be waiting..:D