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person Bargle5
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To Ozark: Yes you did review this before. In fact, yours was the first review for it here.

To Ozark and Tiffany:
As for continuing it, I think a followup would only end up being a disappointment.
For example, I wrote "I Blame Ron Jeremy", intending it to be a oneshot. I succumbed to requests and wrote a followup, "Lavender Takes the Lead" which didn't come out nearly as entertaining. I try not to make the same mistake twice.

Thanks for reviewing. :-)
person TiffANY
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This does look quite interesting

Please continue

I can't wait to see where this goes :)
person ozarkmoon
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I may have reviewed this before, but another one will not hurt anything. I adore this one shot. Very in character for our beloved Professor, with a small hint of humanity to him. I understand your wanting the reader to decide if she says no or not -- but again I would enjoy it greatly if you expanded the story.
person Bargle5
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nightscribe, you're making me blush. Thanks again for the review. Also again, this is another one of my favorites of my own stories. I wish they all turned out as well.
person NightScribe
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet another classic. This fic, too, I read on the other site. Loved it both times. What I enjoyed was the character is completely canon (nice job) and the one-sided conversation pulls you in; giving the illusion that he may be talking directly to the reader. The reveal at the very end is a perfect kicker and well worth the wait. The open ending, leaving the reader to decide for themselves, was an excellent decision, reinforcing the almost "interactive" feel of the story.

I admit, I have developed an intense love/hate relationship with your fics. Love them for the creativity and your obvious talent, and hate them as they make me want to go back and rethink and review my own fics with a far more critical and objective eye than I already employ. But, a little extra dose of humility can be a good thing, and I thank you; it instills the aspiration to reach your level of talent. Good authors do that!
person Marchatorium
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations. :) Very refreshing and good. I\'m about reading your other stories.
person JJ
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love that line that they had that conversation before! And your right. My imagination is leading me in all kinds of directions. Rather than bore you with them since you said the story is complete, I\'ll just say THANK YOU.
person ice owl
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
May I have first dibs on being polyjiced to switch with Ms. Granger, please?
person Jen
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter!!
person Bambu
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How utterly refreshing. I loved this.