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person michelle
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Oh! what a good story, kind of funny, with the bull you know. lol keep updating and keep writing more hermione and draco stories.
person Artemis
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Well written and well thought out. The ending was unexpected, but good. So keep up the good work.
person jarry87655
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whata cliff hanger let\'s see if malfoy likes being under a mucblood
person Artemis
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s very good, however I suggest that if you finish it it would be even better.
person DD
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a great story, but have you considered checking your work. I know that I sound like a teacher or a parent, (BTW, I\'m not) but if you read it aloud you find mistakes better, or you could have someone read it to you. I know that might seem lame but trust me on this one.
PS I\'m writing a story on another website can I borrow one of your ideas? (Well really I\'m just telling you that I am going to) You can email me if you don\'t want me to.
person DemonDaughter
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you do that to me? I was just getting into it and then you just had to go and not finish the story! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease finish it soon, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaase!
person DD
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s really good I expected her to torture him some more. I really think that you should continue with the story.
person Sexy relly
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please. please, please udate soon. Cant wait!
person Avanell
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More soon! This is really cute. Loved the store guy. Was he hot himself? STill...suggesting DRaco try out the mechanical bull with Hermione was priceless. Can\'t wait to see that happen...and first, DRaco finding out what it does. That should be comical!
person Jason
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the next part.
You left off in a spot to where I really need to read more