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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update?
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i cant believe u leeft me w/ that evil cliffhanger! Bad writer, bad! :)
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woa! wat a comprimising position. Please continue, cant wait to c wat happens next.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s very good, but I don\'t think that you should have a message in the body of the story, people won\'t take you seirously as a writer. Oh and thank you for letting me \'borrow\' some of your ideas. Overall, good job! Keep up the good work. Update soon.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! its fantastic! I have been reading random stories and this one caught my eye but everytime i tried to read it i got interrupted, i finally finished and i LOVE IT! GREAT JOB! UPDATE SOON!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really really good. I like it and It\'s awesome
Keep righting
Amber
Keep righting
Amber
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t leave me hanging or in this case riding. Update Soon!!!!!!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She left him wanting more
Great Part
Great Part
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This Shit is Hot! Hurrah^^
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You would really benefit from a beta reader. This is a good story, but it\'s very distracting because you use different tenses, sometimes in the same sentence. Look up some examples of the correct use of present and past tense and practice it a bit. Otherwise I\'m liking your story.