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What a place to leave us!! Update soon, please!!

Sorry, I forgot to write something in the other one. I don't know where you are from, but if from America, have you seen the Hardee's commercial? The one with the girl on the mechanical bull? That's what you ought to have Hermione do for Draco. Put on a show. If you haven't seen it, it's like she's having sex on the bull. Going kinda slow and basically humping it. Actually pretty sexy. I couldn't believe they used it as a commercial to sell hamburgers! It's also kinda like the scene in Urban Cowboy, if you've ever seen the movie, where Debra Winger rides the bull. It would be a way to get Draco's attention again, if he'd gone back to his stupid attitude and/or make him jealous if she did it in front of others or both. I can see every guy wanting to be the bull and sporting wood only to have Draco notice something going on when it got really quite or loud with catcalls and I can see Draco drooling and having a fit after realizing what was going on and throwing out everyone in one of his possesive tantrums, as she should only show that side of herself for him. Also, you could have them fucking on the bull, fun, fun, fun!! Then Draco could buy it for himself and her, to keep ..... anyway, just an idea. Use it, don't use it, it's up to you. I look forward to seeing what you do!

That was sexy, but poor Draco. I hope he\'s all right!

ooo update!

Awesome update!! but i cant believe he passed out i was waiting for some action!!! lol, pleae update soon!

Why...the book....which must surely be the biggest book in history....head...book....not cool.....Very good though hot scenes and I was wondering when he was going to pass out-Update soon

Idiot passed out. He should have gotten help with his head.
Great Job

*bursts out laughing* haha.. too much blood loss.
MORe! i loved it.

Leaving me in suspense, please update soon.

I love it!!! Take your time if need be but know that you are driving me crazy waiting but it is wonderful story!!!