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for Mistaken

by LadyRaye

person Dreamweaver
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What's not to love about this chapter? Wonderful work once again. Good on Susan but I wish she'd found out before they got hitched. Stupid Ron, doesn't he realise he might miss out on seeing his own flesh and blood grow up. What's got into him. And I almost dread the next Draco/Hermione meeting. Well done!!
person tabitoo
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no this is not good. Draco should realize that Hermione loves him. Now after she leaves the scene with Ron and goes in search for Draco, in the temper he's in, it'll be out of the pan and into the fire.
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please update soon!!
person Mmoirai
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Ron's such a jerk! Hope he gets what he deserves! Great chapter though. Keep it coming! Thanks for the quick update too.
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person sheedy
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Oh what will Hermione do now? Potter better talk to Draco. Poor Hermione, poor Susan. please update soon!!!!
person blondiexoxo
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg what the hell is gunna happen u have to update like really soon
person lemonade
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Ron certainly is a psycho. Did Susan kill him? If not, I'm sure she'd leave him. He probably will have a nice padded room at St. Mungo's by the time the story is done. Hope Draco wises up.
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE THE STORY AT SUCH AN IMPORTANT PART?!?!
please update soon...
sooooo good!!
person novasenshi
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
RON IS SUCK A DICK....

okay, that's all...oh and good CHAPTER!