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for Mistaken

by LadyRaye

person fiona
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chpater! update soon!
person lemonade
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like what you are doing with this. Hermione and Draco have a healthier relationship than just about everybody else. Everyone is so very tolerant of Ron, but I haven\'t figured out why. He\'s being horrible and selfish, I\'m surprised Harry and Hermione have put up with his self-serving bullshit for so long. I was rooting for Draco to use the cruciatus!! lol. Now to get Hermione\'s head where it ought to be.....
person moxie
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating! And on Halloween too- what a treat! Really liked this chapter, you see how Draco & Hermione\'s relatinship is subtley changing.
person lemonade
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ron\'s double standards seems compatible with canon. I could actually see him doing this kind of thing, with his immaturity and his selfishness. The thing that seems menacing is that he now hates Hermione as much as Malfoy. Makes me think that sheis in for some trouble with Won won. ~shiver~

Harry doesn\'t know yet, I wonder if she will tell him the truth about why she\'s using Malfoy or not. If not, he might have a really hard time with her new \'boyfriend\'. It\'s still a bit sad that the only thing she can count on with the men in her life is that according to them, she is only good enough to be used. They treat her like a slut, and then condemn her for it.
person Michelle
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh! I LOVE THIS STORY. THIS CHAPTER, ALSO. I CAN\'T WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I CAN\'T WAIT FOR YOU TO FINISH THE STORY.
person moxie
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya! Nice work! I\'ve just discovered your story, and I absolutely love it. Their emotions were definitely high during their \"fake relationship\" and confrontation with Ron. It made me feel so giddy, and I can\'t wait to read more of this. Please update soon, and thanks. Peace!

Love, me.
person Lensa
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent...you must update. I really like Hermione\'s character...she is more than two dimensional, which makes her feel more real.


Thanks,
Lensa
person fiona
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter update soon!
person coco puffs
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, i love your story! keep up the good work ;D