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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bastard isn't a motherless child, it's a child born out of wedlock.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh. good chapter, despite how short it is. stupid draco and his pride...taking back an "i love you"..ouch. lol hermione overreacted i think though. it's not like he'd been hiding it for months, he hadn't really seen her since he received it aside from screwing her senseless, and that's hardly the time to bring up death omens. lol. and she should know him well enough to know that he didn't mean it when he said that saying he loved her was a mistake. silly girl. she's smart, she'll figure it out. lol so much drama...it brings me joy :P
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
p.s. happy birthday! :D
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am so glad that he didn't deny the confession! Good to see Hermione, uh, put him in his place!!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey again!
The update was quick as usual, and I'm grateful that her feisty side comes out this time. I'm thrilled that she bound him up, and am surprised that nothing kinky is involved so far. I love the way he's definitely getting a piece of her mind, and hope that afterwards they can fight the scary stalkers off together. Thanks again, and can't wait to read more. Peace!
Love, me.
The update was quick as usual, and I'm grateful that her feisty side comes out this time. I'm thrilled that she bound him up, and am surprised that nothing kinky is involved so far. I love the way he's definitely getting a piece of her mind, and hope that afterwards they can fight the scary stalkers off together. Thanks again, and can't wait to read more. Peace!
Love, me.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chpater!
Oh yeah, Happy Birthday!
Oh yeah, Happy Birthday!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are a few continuity errors. In an early chapter, you make reference to Lucius being in Azkaban, and if he escapes, he'll hunt Draco down. Then just a few chapters later, you remark that no one has been in the master bedroom since Lucius died.
Another one- you have Draco recieve the letter, then in the next chapter it remarks that it's been a few days since he recieved it. Then when Hermione finds it and asks about it, he says he was given it the night before when he left the Leaky Cauldron.
If those are cleaned up, it'd be a fine story.
Another one- you have Draco recieve the letter, then in the next chapter it remarks that it's been a few days since he recieved it. Then when Hermione finds it and asks about it, he says he was given it the night before when he left the Leaky Cauldron.
If those are cleaned up, it'd be a fine story.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic so far! Your writing style is amazing. The sex is hot and beautiful, the dialogue is snappish and witty, and the plot is to die for. I can't wait for more!!!
~Sara
~Sara
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey again!
Thanks for the awesome update. I was completely overwhelmed when she offhandedly remembered whispering -the- words to each other. It's great that she found the letter, and I wonder how he will make it up to her for keeping it from her. Hope that they'll be able to fight evil together with all their love and hot sex. Thanks heaps, and can't wait to read more. Peace!
Love, me.
Thanks for the awesome update. I was completely overwhelmed when she offhandedly remembered whispering -the- words to each other. It's great that she found the letter, and I wonder how he will make it up to her for keeping it from her. Hope that they'll be able to fight evil together with all their love and hot sex. Thanks heaps, and can't wait to read more. Peace!
Love, me.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm greatly enjoying your story so far and am looking forward to the next chapter. I found your story by chance this afternoon and was wondering about how often you update. Like is it every couple of days, couple of weeks, months or whenever the hell you get time to write a chapter. Any kind of time frame would be appreciated so I don't make myself nutty checking back every day for updates!