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for Mistaken

by LadyRaye

person stacy
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was adorable! very well written, please update soon!
person curlyq2713
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, yaay! update soon please!!!
person Evil Turtle8
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story it is well writen and i allmost lost it in with my other bookmarks but i am glade I found it again and with two new chapters or alest ones i haven't read keep up the great work
person Emmeline Vance
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey again!

As usual, this was a wonderful new installment of your fic. Her admission that the sex is great was hilarious, and my only sadness is that there was no hot sex in this chapter, although I'm not worried because I know your make up sex will not be disappointing.

I absolutely love the fact that he now will tell her about hte next letter, and I wonder how she will react to this. Thanks again for the wonderful update, and can't wait to read more. Peace!

Love, me.
person ~*~the n0ticible one~*~
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic!!!!...u sooo have to keep going i am dying to know what happens!!!!
person al
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soz i just want 2 point this out, if u r a bastard your mum and dad aren't married not they abandoned you, cos a bastard is a son of a bitch (bitch meaning she is a man's mistriss or she's a prostetute. good story though!! well done!
person sands
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome! awesome awesome awesome! please update soon
person blondiexoxo
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it alot like really i do so i hope to read more chapters later on
person Penguin
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So happy you updated. I wish there was atleast some D/Hr interaction, hopefully next chapter.
person Stacy
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! I wonder what the note said...hmmm...