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for Burdens of the Heart

by innocentimp

person vbollman
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Sev is in trouble now. ~snicker~ how much longer before they figure out what the hell is going on between the two of them. and when does the rest of the order notice???

keep up the great work

luvs ya
person Katie
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...that was so cute! *grins* Poor Severus, having to strip to keep Harry warm. Harry's not going to wake up naked in Sev's arms, is he? That would be entertaining, but I fear Harry would have a heart attack. I loved how "sobering" it was for Severus to realize that Harry knew he was only viewed as a weapon to most of the Order. I'm glad that Pettigrew's dead, but I'm more glad that Severus seems to be progressing with his feelings for Harry, even though he doesn't seem to know it yet. Harry's idea about not using a dark spell against Voldemort was interesting. I'd never really thought of that. Are Ron and Hermione really going to help with that, or will he and Severus be together by that point? *grins* Just wondering. This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Oh, and Sev's thoughts were really entertaining.

Katie
person En4cerMax
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooo. Keep going. Mmmmm I'd like to have a half naked Severus lying behind me when I'm cold. :)
person SpikesWoman
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and cant wait for an update. Your portrayle of Harry is spot on and I really like the direction you are going with Snape. Looking forward to more.
person SpikesWoman
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and cant wait for an update. Your portrayle of Harry is spot on and I really like the direction you are going with Snape. Looking forward to more.
person vbollman
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please say you're going to update soon. I love the way this story is developing. I just can't wait to hear more
person jess
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know it sounds strange but after reading that, i feel warm and fuzzy inside. please continue, i like the feeling
person andie
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your view of Snape and Harry, your view of their situation. Very nice story!
person Sahira
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been trying to avoid all HBP fics, I just can't accept what happened...I'm still in denial..pah...But your fic is sooooooooo gooooood! It just feels so "real". And I love it when things progres slowly! Update:)
person Katie
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! I loved how Severus seems to be the only one really concerned about Harry. I loved the interaction
between the two of them in this chapter, and how Harry was so scared and confused. I think his reactions are very believable,
and I love that Severus was there to help him. The very last scene with Severus tucking Harry in was great, as was the part
about Harry dreaming about Severus. I can't wait to read more! Oh, and I'm really glad that Charlie realizes that when Harry
does love someone, he won't love Charlie. That's good to know. *grins*

Katie