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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person ladyX
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nive chapter once again. I love this fic and cant wait for more. I wanna know what is up with Harry and Lucius and why they wont say eachothers names Oh and why Lucius is such an ass about \"controlling him\" cause that is just horrid. cant wait for more.
person Akusaa
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOO! SNAPE! lol, as long as Harry and Draco stay together I\'m happy.

Draco is so mean, ignoring him like that. Update soon?
person Fefs
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aiaiaia, i can\'t wait to see harry waking up.. And to see how things will go with severus on the house.. will Draco be jealous? Hey.. humm... are you thinking about putting Snape, Harry and Draco together? If you do, please tell warn us like you did the last time? Hugs!!
person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very good!!! :D me loves it..
but me also wonders what you mean by
\"Please do tell me what you think. I am curious about
Draco\'s interaction with a certain someone... ;)\"
hmm...is it snape?? or Lucius?? wait a minute, are you hinting at a soon-to-be falling out between father and son?
or is Snape the \"other Supero\" you indicated in the very beginning of the story?
Will Snape be the competition later on to Draco?
Is Daniel Muroch just a red herring?
why am I asking all these questions?
WHY ARENT YOU ANSWERING!?!?!
hehehe
yea, ok...sorry about that...I got carried away :D
hehe
well update soon!!
person Frit
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Somehow your story leaves me an avid HD fan with a craving for Sev\'n Harry. Keep up the good work.
person Missi
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is pissing me off! Gods, he reminds me of my mother-in-law!! I love this fic! Thanks so much for continuing it! I can\'t wait for more!!
person Twilight
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t say when I\'ve enjoyed a Harry Potter story more. When will Draco ever learn and poor Harry is touch starved. I\'m just glad that Snape was there to save the day again and I really hope he reduces Draco to a big sub puddle.

Can\'t wait for the next one.
person JJ
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have really made your Draco mature in this story! That he could accept his responsibility towards Harry and accept Snape\'s help with caring for him makes him sooooo much more than he was in the first story. He grew up. So did Snape in a way. That he would want to help Harry when in the last story, at almost this same spot, he did the exact opposite when he had to care for the pregnant man. They are forming a pack to care for the young. Unfortunately you have two elements that could topple the delicate balance: Lucius and that other one from the America\'s. Right now, I\'m worried about the harm Lucius could cause with his attitude if Harry\'s left ungarded. I\'m also a little surprised that Snape would let the younger Draco be so dominant in the group when he has all the characteristics of the better leader. Hmmmmm. What will you toss into the mixture next?
person Nightwing
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, great chapter. I hope everyone will later be informed that Harry isn\'t some sort of psyhco :P
I loved how Harry had \"decorated\" the house with Draco\'s clothes, and the lunch bit.... despite being angsty, still made me giggle
Can\'t wait for more
Chow for now!
person dedmun
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
draco is a freakin\' idiot! i hope snape rips him a new one. stupid bastard! keep up the great writing! i really love this story. can\'t wait for the next post. hope its super soon!