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OMG He\'s going to kill her for flirting with SNAPE!!!! or maybe she\'s an imposter??? I\'m lost but soooooo very happy you\'ve updated. Do it again as soon as you can okay i\'m on a cliff and I might just fall off...

Hello. I quite enjoyed Indago and have been enjoying Indago:Reborn. Until now, that is. I was utterly dismayed by Harry\'s treatment in this chapter--I found the indignity he was made to suffer beyond the pale. To me, that\'s saying something given much of what he has suffered in both this story and the one previous. But, I always felt (before now, anyway) that either Draco or Severus was rooting for him as a person--someone with intelligence, independence; someone worthy and deserving of respect. Draco and Severus\'s treatment of him in this chapter, however, seem to point to a complete and total lack of respect. They (Severus especially) were unnecessarily cruel and paternalistic. They treated him as a thing; something to be toyed with at their whim, something without thought or feeling. Heartbreaking, really. My only hope is that this is merely a plot point that will either force Harry to leave or will be explained in some other satisfactory way.

Please understand that I get that the relationship between Harry/Draco and/or Harry/Severus is unequal. I get that Harry is a sub. I even get that that the conversation between Draco and Severus while Harry was attempting to throw things was meant to be humourous (though, I think the \"humor\" merely exacerbated the exploitive cruelty Harry was made to suffer). But, what I don\'t get is the complete disregard for his dignity by people who have come to love him (Draco) and care for him (Severus). Neither emotion is present in this chapter and the characters appear to act without regard to the themes and motivations you have already established. You are a gifted storyteller and, certainly, this is your story to tell. This chapter, however, does not feel like your story.

I look forward to the next chapter (I really do) if for no other reason than to be proven wrong in my assessment.

--Siren

well then that was...interesting...nice of Draco to be home early.cant wait for more

That was great!! I\'s sooo loving how Harry\'s acting! It\'s different from many other creature Preggy stories!! I laughed reading the whole chapter! I also loved how Draco calmed him down!! That was cute too me! Please update ASAP!! Can\'t wait to find out what happens next!

Oh they are sooo going to get it if Harry ever rebels. Better watch out there are more doms out there that would gladly take Harry. Not to mention the werewolves. I can\'t wait for chapter 11! I\'m glad Draco came home to be with his husband. About time!

Hidden inside of Harry is still the questioning, head-strong Potter. I hope, at least. But, won\'t he be angry with Severus\' experimenting. Will the other Indago come back into the picture? Will Severus ever have to pay for all the things he\'s inducing in Harry? Will Draco start spending time Harry because he realizes he loves his mate, or will he keep having to be put into situations by Severus?

what is hermione\'s problem?? moving in on snape like that?!?!?!?
grrr!!
Get away BITCH!!
I bet thats what Harry\'s thinking no?
heheheheh
all this jealous rage!
he reminds me of me!!
*tears up*
they grow up sooo fast!
I hope you dont make this into a snape/hermione!
noway!!!
update soon please!!

OMG! For some reason that reaction from Harry to Hermione talking to one of his Doms is exactly believable! I am sitting here laughing because I can just see a horrified Snape trying to pull him off his best friend and trying to obliterate her so that she won\'t know that Harry did it again.

Whoa, very surprising ending there. Why would Harry want to kill Hermione? I suppose you have your ideas and reasons for this one, but either way, it\'s excellent as always ^^. Wonder when Draco will return back... Beautifully well done mate, I hope I\'ll see you at the next chapter!

-Elk

oh my friggen god!!! Why is he strangling her?!?!?! I honestly can\'t think of a reason. He JUST got out of SNape\'s bed...he ate...he slept. Snape touched him... I...O_O Don\'t get it!!!!!!! *whines*

UPDATE DAMNIT!

<3 I still love you.

*~* Krazy *~*