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Hooray for quick updates! I\'m glad you gave us that last chapter- it did help to bring the \'pack\' back to cohesiveness a bit (before, it seemed like Draco and Snape were dealing with a puppy- one they didn\'t care about much.) I can\'t believe I\'m about to write this, but I think I could really use some fluff (the inner me cringes as I type) to make Draco at least back into the caring husband he\'s supposed to be (isn\'t he???)
And I loved your zoologist. Good diversion!
Please, please please don\'t make us wait long for more new chapters!

OOOo

harry attacked moine. Oh No

great fic emotional harry loving sorta draco

Please tell me when u update

sarah

How mean of Snape, hope Hermione pays him back good. Please update soon, another excellent chapter.

that was a very nasty experiment Snape did. but it did prove a point.

can\'t wait till the next chapter

*breathes a sigh of relief*
suspense over! I had a feeling harry was jealous but I had no idea it was an experiment!
Its nice to know that snape has no feelings for hermione...that was bothering me for awhile...for what reason, only God knows...
I mean snape...hermione....no.
I have a problem with him being with logan as it is...if he had feelings for hermione, suffice it to say, that that would have incited me to discontinue reading this story (and I dont wanna do that! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!)

this chapter is entirely too short just so you know ;)
but its good that you\'ve put that evil cliffie to rest!
thank you for that!
I couldnt sleep at night because of the disturbing ending to chapter 9!
*hey! i\'m not weird!!!*
hehehe
love love love this chapter and the story in general!
please update soon and we\'ll love the story and you even more!!
^-^

Another side note:
I forgot to mention this in my previous post, but I do hope that Harry will be given more respect by his superos in the future.
If not, will he be driven into the arms of a certain...*ahem ahem*...mr. muroch? *blushes*(sounds hot actually!)
*fans self*
*wonders how 2 jealous indagos will act like...how romantic! or not...they\'ll probably rip muroch\'s head off if that happens*

Anyways, please ignore the ridiculous writing by my alter ego in between the asterisks.
What I\'m trying to get at is: I hope there\'s a method to the madness of snape (and draco)
Its really hurtful to read Harry (such a strong character originally) to be made to kneel to others when he is pregnant!
I could understand it b4 (it was strangely kinky in Indago--except the throwing-harry-down-the-stairs episode), but now he\'s pregnant. he deserves to be treated with more respect
not that I think he only should get respect when he\'s with child, but he should be treated with more care and concern. snape and draco are bastards here and I hope you can resolve that in the future chapters :D
please?!
update soon!
we love ur work!

Hi, Love your writing, and am really enjoying this sequel. I feel at times as though poor Harry is getting such a lack of respect and although it is apparent that Draco loves him, it\'s almost like he\'s a possession, which I guess is the Indago-ness and I\'m not expressing myself well. I feel annoyed at Snape treating Harry as research and not as a real live person going through a difficult time and I guess I see Draco not treating him that well either and I feel so bad for him. And Hermione, poor poppet. Harry is going to feel so dreadful about that, something that Snape didn\'t take into account or doesn\'t care about, Harry\'s not a toy to play with he\'s a real live person, sorry ranting now. I\'m stopping and saying that I can\'t wait to see where you are taking our boys.

Hugs

Kat

Poor Hermione. But how could she guess that Harry will get jealous over Snape?

Let me begin by saying that I LOVE your stories. I love that the relationships are complex and I love the subtleties of your characterizations. I think the humor is hilarious and the specifics of their species are amazingly creative.

That said, I am having a hard time getting on board with these latest chapters. I am hoping that it is intentionally so- that you are building up the tension in anticipation of some sort of resolution i.e. MASSIVE guilt and apologetic behavior, if not the actual words, on the part of Draco and now Snape as well.

There\'s the dominant/submissive aspect of their relationship and I really do understand that. It isn\'t always a fluffy sort of love and I understand that as well. But I find Draco and Snape\'s behavior as of late to be absolutely appalling. It isn\'t a matter of dominance, but of being callous, cruel, and objectifying Harry. They are not treating his (very genuine and valid) emotions and reactions with any sort of concern or decency. He\'s like a toy or an actual pet that they manipulate, then laugh at his expense.

As I said, I certainly don\'t mean to question your writing, which is absolutely superb. I\'m sure you have a dramatic arch planned out here. It\'s just getting to the point that it is very uncomfortable to read, as their treatment of Harry is bordering on unforgivable in my eyes. Perhaps that is merely the point of view of one who has witnessed similar behavior in real life relationships, I don\'t know.

Anyhow, it\'s as well-written as always and I do absolutely love your writing. Will be looking forward to the next chapter!

yay!! another update! thank you!! I love this story so much, good job!
Cheers!
Kates