rate_review Reviews

Awsome story so far. Can\'t waite for you to put up some new chapters.

I guess he got a clue about how the Indago \"pack\" works! Don\'t be suprised at the critics, just be aware there are far more of us who love how the story is going. Yo have created a whole new \"race\" after all, and Severus wouldn\'t be Severus if he didn\'t want to know how things work.
More soon, please.

^^ I LOVE IT WHEN A IDIOT ANGERS THEM!!!!


Please continue! I simply love it!

oh! this chapter was fun to read :-) great humor in it, especially the end :-)
There was alot of critizism of the last chapter? *Hmm* *thinks about it* I guess you could see it in a bad light.... But I can\'t say I feelt that it was all that bad when I read it, coz I can\'t remember any stong feelings like that.
I think your doing a great jobb with this fic and I love every update, there is allways a new twist I didn\'t see coming.
I hope the others wheren\'t to harsh with their coments.
youre dedicated fan/Avihenda

This is a great story... I\'ve been addicted since chapter 1 of the first series and if your readers have by now not become used to the Supero behavior and are making stupid flaming remarks, I would just ignore them. If they don\'t like or are offended by how Hermonie was being treated (which I personally found very amusing) they can go read something else. This entire story is based on a species that has a dom/sub core. If you expect fair and equal treatment of all characters than you have no idea what a dom/sub relationship is about. I think you\'ve done a great job of creating and describing the Indagos and I\'m very impressed with your originality and writing. Please continue!

What was this chapter, comic relief? Lol. Great story so far. Thank you for delaying the birth. I\'m not really looking foward to having the baby around. I think Snape\'s experiments are awesome- I hope you don\'t stop!

wow that\'s classic haha =D what a fun short chapter XD see ya soon!

ah, I had missed the chapter they where all complaning about. you updated to fast. ;-)
After reading it, I understand where the others are comming from. You\'ve managed to get a feeling of \"nazis doing experiments\" -feeling right trou the chapter.
The entire chapter get\'s this chilly feeling of \"something is not right\".
But in the same time, I get the feeling that Draco very much still thinks that it\'s the same problem as the day before, that harry is just not himself yet. Snape feels a bit like he\'s a bit to into the experiment. That\'s probably where the nazi- feeling is comming from. (sorry I\'ve been watching discovery a bit to much, they only show WW2 dokumentaries when I\'m watching...)
But all in all, the chapter has an eerie feeling to it, but I feel that it\'s ok in the wider scope of the fic. It gives a bit of perspective and you get to see draco and snape in an onusual light.
still a great fan :-)

o_o well that seemed really odd.. it was a funny short piece (love harry\'s reaction btw!) but seemed so totally out of place with what was going on (i thought harry was taken to bed?) that it\'s made me confused...

God that was short!!! I need more! MORE! NOW!