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I like your story, I just wish that Draco was taking care of Harry more.

love your chapter always!! i realise reviews from aff isn\'t that convenient, what a long list in one page ><\'\' they should have make it neater.

So, what will that mysterious piece of licorice do to Harry?

^^ Homework... nice. I hope Logan goes away. I don\'t like him. Can\'t wait for the baby!!

Oy... I forgot about Logan. Pissy fellow, ain\'t he? ;P

I only just found this fic yesterday, and I\'ve never really been a fan of Snape pairings (more the fault of a lack of skilled authors like you, I would imagine), but you pleasantly surprised me. In just two days, I managed to read all four of the fics you have posted on aff.net, and I was not disappointed. The characterizations were great, the storylines well thought out, and even your grammar was impeccable. Truthfully, you made me like Snape, and I bow to you for that. I look forward to anything else you post, and good job so far.

Love love love the loverly thang.

hehe! YAY!! I am glad they are attacking together instead of eachother now! great chapter!
Cheers!
Kates

that what that guy gets!! he shouldn\'t have touch harry!! i\'m not really bother with the way snape and draco act and i\'m okay with snape experimenting and in Indago i loved the threesome...i think it\'s so cute the way harry gets angry and how he tries to intimadate everyone by saying he\'s going to lucius, because he is intimadted by him. i just loved it^^ and i LOVE how he has this thing with soft fabric ^^ it\'s so cute!! please update soon!

I LOVE your story and no one could write it better than you do, so I hope you didn\'t take my concerns as criticism. They certainly weren\'t intended as such, but rather just to let you know exactly how emotionally involved we get with your story. Whereas you know exactly where it is going and why the Superos act the way they do, we don\'t always see that right away. Does that make sense? It\'s not that I don\'t trust that you have a great reason for everything you\'ve written and the way you\'ve written it. I just wanted to let you know that after the last few chapters, I was really hurting for Harry.

Anyhow, I will always love your story. LOVE! It\'s one of my permanent favorites, and I hope that you didn\'t take offense to anything I said, as it certainly wasn\'t intended that way. With my own writing, one of the most helpful reviews to get is the emotional reaction of a reader that is totally different to my own. I know that as I\'m writing, I typically have the end result in mind, which has a huge effect on how I perceive everything that happens in between.

I will stop rambling now and tell you that the last chapter (as all of your chapters) was great. I loved that Harry was kick-ass in addition to Snape and Draco. I have to say, I can\'t get enough of Snape and Draco in this setting- as the dangerous magical creatures with their hackles up. Beautifully done!