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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person Storm
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! a great update. Can't wait for more. And Submissive, apologetic Snape. I nearly fell off my chair. Great job!
person Becky
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My!!Snape!!: O
person HP Fan
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O wow, i bet that took a lot from sev. ^.^ *cheers* yay for him. *laughs* i know it's mean of me, but i can just picture harry twitching his head a lot. his situation sucks, but i'm always one for torture and cool stuff like that, so of course i'm enjoying his "new" supero. ^.- i'm also looking forward to future chaps, yur fic has just the right amount of suspense and "evilness"/angst. perfect for my darker cravings. how long has harry been missing again? hm, mebe i'll find out if i look back a few chaps. ^.^ thank u for the update! i enjoyed it immensely!! >.< good luck with the next one!!!
person SA
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I honnestly hope that Draco and Snape rescue Harry soon or better yet, why doesn't Harry escape himself? Its soooooo hard reading the bits about Harry!!
person avihenda
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah! they are getting close to finding harry!
person Nitasha
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go angst! Bah..I like fluff sometimes but angst is the way to go ;)... D/s is very appealing as well...Poor Severus...he had to submit...Poor Harry...I wonder if he has physical scars because of the difference with werewolves?
person acr
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor harry! I liked the way draco confronted snape.
person coriander
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok seriously, this is too intense. You need to get Harry out of there right this instant. I can't see how he could ever recover from this. and please please please don't give those bastards a quick death? I really want them hanging in the dungeon being tortured for the rest of their lives. Really. So they have a chance to really think of what they were doing and beg for forgiveness that will never come. I need to go read something funny now before I loose my mind.

you are too good of an author cuz I'm really upset lol.
person mira
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are dragging out the agony... please rescue harry!! please make him all better:( harry isnt in the chamber, doesnt he have any wandless magic at all? cant he do anything? Please please please? and update!! too long between chapters....
person Phebes
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cruel... what a sad chapter that was... Just exactly how long has Harry been captured??
Seriously, he's already been passed around by all the werewolves..?
What is up with Harry anyways... he's the bloody damn savior of the wizarding world!
He has powers from being an Indago as well doesn't he? With a combo like that, he should be able
to take out those werewolves and that Indago!!
Can't he even defend himself a bit? Geez, he's portrayed as so weak... and it's just pathetic.
I don't know what to think anymore ... but yeah besides that, thank you for writing this
very interesting and amazing story... so much that it is obviously causing me a lot of turmoil. :D