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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! She is so cute! I knew the American would come back! ^_^ That makes me happy! I want Draco to fight for Harry. Another great chapter and i cannot wait for more!! Update soon please!
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG UPDATE SOON!!!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, hes had a baby, so amazing the way you\'ve done all that
its brilliant, the way Harry responds so to the child, like a true caring father,
This is such a good story, and Dracos so sweet as a Daddy, its lovely,
Snape as well, you know i\'m generally liking this whole set up with the three of them.
Please please write more,
And would you believe, i was reading abck over it and i realised, i missed a whole chapter, the one at the ministry as well, can you
believe it, what an idiot am i???
Keep Writing, Update SOon,
ChasteBlush
x x x
its brilliant, the way Harry responds so to the child, like a true caring father,
This is such a good story, and Dracos so sweet as a Daddy, its lovely,
Snape as well, you know i\'m generally liking this whole set up with the three of them.
Please please write more,
And would you believe, i was reading abck over it and i realised, i missed a whole chapter, the one at the ministry as well, can you
believe it, what an idiot am i???
Keep Writing, Update SOon,
ChasteBlush
x x x
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry is still so cute and adorable. Another marvelous chapter. Please update soon.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe, poor Draco. lovely chapter
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeppers! Another great chappie!!
*HIP HIP HOORAY!! HIP HIP HOORAY!!!*
I dont know why I even bother writing on AFF if I write on your LJ...but oh well, its become a force of habit! :D
You had some mistakes on this chapter (I wouldnt point them out bc they are so minute, but I know you\'re a perfectionist)
the most glaringly obvious one (and the only one I can remember now) was the wrong name designated to the character: it says \"Draco smiled innocently up at Draco...\" when I believe it should say \"Harry smiled innocently up at Draco...\"
But that\'s just a small mistake!
I hope you had an EXCELLENT Turkey Day!!
I have 15 pounds of good Turkey food inside my tummy...well, its more like 1/2 pound anyways
*shrugs*
hehe!
Take care of yourself and update soon! (even though I know it will be a week, but I\'m counting on you to have a change of heart and update sooner than that! :D I know that if all the readers/reviewers band together, we\'ll be able to pursuade you!!!(
MWAHAHAHAHAH!! THAT is the power of the audience over the author!!!!!
hehehehe
anyways, update soon!!!
*HIP HIP HOORAY!! HIP HIP HOORAY!!!*
I dont know why I even bother writing on AFF if I write on your LJ...but oh well, its become a force of habit! :D
You had some mistakes on this chapter (I wouldnt point them out bc they are so minute, but I know you\'re a perfectionist)
the most glaringly obvious one (and the only one I can remember now) was the wrong name designated to the character: it says \"Draco smiled innocently up at Draco...\" when I believe it should say \"Harry smiled innocently up at Draco...\"
But that\'s just a small mistake!
I hope you had an EXCELLENT Turkey Day!!
I have 15 pounds of good Turkey food inside my tummy...well, its more like 1/2 pound anyways
*shrugs*
hehe!
Take care of yourself and update soon! (even though I know it will be a week, but I\'m counting on you to have a change of heart and update sooner than that! :D I know that if all the readers/reviewers band together, we\'ll be able to pursuade you!!!(
MWAHAHAHAHAH!! THAT is the power of the audience over the author!!!!!
hehehehe
anyways, update soon!!!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeppers! Another great chappie!!
*HIP HIP HOORAY!! HIP HIP HOORAY!!!*
I dont know why I even bother writing on AFF if I write on your LJ...but oh well, its become a force of habit! :D
You had some mistakes on this chapter (I wouldnt point them out bc they are so minute, but I know you\'re a perfectionist)
the most glaringly obvious one (and the only one I can remember now) was the wrong name designated to the character: it says \"Draco smiled innocently up at Draco...\" when I believe it should say \"Harry smiled innocently up at Draco...\"
But that\'s just a small mistake!
I hope you had an EXCELLENT Turkey Day!!
I have 15 pounds of good Turkey food inside my tummy...well, its more like 1/2 pound anyways
*shrugs*
hehe!
Take care of yourself and update soon! (even though I know it will be a week, but I\'m counting on you to have a change of heart and update sooner than that! :D I know that if all the readers/reviewers band together, we\'ll be able to pursuade you!!!(
MWAHAHAHAHAH!! THAT is the power of the audience over the author!!!!!
hehehehe
anyways, update soon!!!
*HIP HIP HOORAY!! HIP HIP HOORAY!!!*
I dont know why I even bother writing on AFF if I write on your LJ...but oh well, its become a force of habit! :D
You had some mistakes on this chapter (I wouldnt point them out bc they are so minute, but I know you\'re a perfectionist)
the most glaringly obvious one (and the only one I can remember now) was the wrong name designated to the character: it says \"Draco smiled innocently up at Draco...\" when I believe it should say \"Harry smiled innocently up at Draco...\"
But that\'s just a small mistake!
I hope you had an EXCELLENT Turkey Day!!
I have 15 pounds of good Turkey food inside my tummy...well, its more like 1/2 pound anyways
*shrugs*
hehe!
Take care of yourself and update soon! (even though I know it will be a week, but I\'m counting on you to have a change of heart and update sooner than that! :D I know that if all the readers/reviewers band together, we\'ll be able to pursuade you!!!(
MWAHAHAHAHAH!! THAT is the power of the audience over the author!!!!!
hehehehe
anyways, update soon!!!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear most favourite author besides J.K. Rowling.
I\'d just like to say that you write beautifully, and I\'ve actually printed out Indago, and what there is of Indago: Reborn, and stapled them together so I can read them anytime I want n___n They are the most creative and intelligent fics I\'ve ever read, not to mention my favourite - if that isn\'t already obvious. They\'re hilarious, and sad, and suspenseful, and I WANT CHAPTER 17 @___@. -breathes slowly- Hmm, yes, anyway. I\'m in love with the way you\'ve portrayed Harry, Draco, and Snape. They were always my favourite characters, but now they\'re even more so. I liked them better when they were still in school, but they\'re still indescribably amazing outside of Hogwarts =D You have true talent, you do. Keep it up ^_________^
- Kayla
I\'d just like to say that you write beautifully, and I\'ve actually printed out Indago, and what there is of Indago: Reborn, and stapled them together so I can read them anytime I want n___n They are the most creative and intelligent fics I\'ve ever read, not to mention my favourite - if that isn\'t already obvious. They\'re hilarious, and sad, and suspenseful, and I WANT CHAPTER 17 @___@. -breathes slowly- Hmm, yes, anyway. I\'m in love with the way you\'ve portrayed Harry, Draco, and Snape. They were always my favourite characters, but now they\'re even more so. I liked them better when they were still in school, but they\'re still indescribably amazing outside of Hogwarts =D You have true talent, you do. Keep it up ^_________^
- Kayla
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, one more thing. THE BABY IS SO ADORABLE =DDDD I love how she has Snape\'s eyes, and most importantly, Draco\'s hair. Beautiful!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So many chapters in the update! And the birth! I like the way you have kept the actually birth so low-key, it really showed how Harry was (and still is) relying on his instinct...hiding away like that and doing the birth by himself.
The way that Draco and Sev had to aprove of the child is also very \'animal\' like, just like in the wild.
Great chapters! Keep on writing!
The way that Draco and Sev had to aprove of the child is also very \'animal\' like, just like in the wild.
Great chapters! Keep on writing!