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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person Sahira
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehee poor Draco!Good chapter:)Update
person anave
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha cute! draco thought he would squash the baby! XD finally harry back to norm =D sad that you can\'t update for a week but it\'s okay, treat us readers something good next time XD
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! Now he knows a bit of what Harry felt. Being alone all that time. Can\'t wait for chapter 18!
person darklady5289
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey is this where we tell draco to be careful what he wishes for. lol i have to say im a bit upset over ack of sex...lol
person avihenda
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute! poor draco, wanting but not getting.
person Alexa
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Delightfull. All of it. :-)

(By the way, you might want to change: \"Draco smiled innocently up at Draco and the blond couldn
person splitbeak
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story. the way you have harry interact with the baby is surprisingly (in a good way) non corny and fun to read. poor draco.
now that the baby\'s born, are they moving to canada soon? is snape going to come with them? i doubt hermione and ron will, but flooing does make visiting easier, although that means lucius could too, which would defeat the purpose.
i had an idea that\'s probably stupid, but i figure there\'s no harm in sharing. what if the american indago abducts harry, trying to breed with him, but ends up being a horrible mate? you know how dogs that are used to fight other dogs in arenas can become little more than snarling, defensive, vicious creatures? like in white fang. draco and snape could save him, and sorta human-ize (for an indago) harry again, help him reconnect with his baby and pack.
i know, stupid, but nothing to lose.
no matter what, i can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Missi
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drops dead in sympathy exhaustion* Just having a normal human baby is hard enough! Love this, can\'t wait for more! Thanks so much for writing it! (Logan annoys me)
person sbkar
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter went by too fast...So, Sev is leaving after Maia\'s Naming, and hopefully, Draco will finally be back to shagging his husband...but, what monkey-wrench is Lucius going to throw into the works?
person Storm
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. Aww no! No more written? Well the story is damn well worth waiting for but please hurry up! (giving sad puppy-dog eyes) :) Great job!