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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person IoS
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xD The conversation between Father and Daughter was precious. My favorite line: 'Fool, I shall live off your money for as long as I can.'

rofl. I loved it.
person Anita
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggle*

Draco and Maia bonding, now that was very sweet! I very much enjoyed Ch 19!!

Keep writting....and let's see Lusius hit the roof when he finds out that some Snape-genes have wandered over to Maia *bg*
person Frikin CArefree
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've Read this chapter about Three times and Its Still as cute as it was the first time, and when Lucius sees the babies eyes HE's going to throw a hissy fit which Is something I look very foward...Man the anticipation is killing me already. Update...uh .... whenever you want.^_^
person sam
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it.....i had to have loved it to read the 58 chapters of indago and the 19 chapters of this one,,,keep it up
person JJ
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooo sweet!!! The conversation between Draco and baby was perfect. Draco really has come a long way from the first story. I wonder, now that Harry has had a baby, does he become a top and expect Draco to bottom???? That would really make Lucius' day! He better not hurt Harry over the babies eyes! Why is he being so mean? Oh, yea...he wants total control of his son and his son's life.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 20! What got into Harry? What happens next? Oh Lucius is going to have a fit over the baby's eyes.
person ice owl
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful chapter. I love a bemused Draco who holds whimsical converstaions with ladies who spit on him then slap him!
person anave
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha i love the baby!! thanks ofr the intimate session too =D
person miku
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, Draco is in harry's bad books. Poor thing. Can't wait 'till the next chapter! xxx
person bunnicle
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
question, what happened to the other chapter? I know it was there cause i read it! .......