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Aww... poor Harry... :( I am sad... I hope that they can work through this... please update soon!
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~

Oh ... ... ... oh ... ... ... ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Ok, here goes, good on Harry for almost killing Lucius, DIE Lucius for threatening to ruin their life together, oh Draco noooooooooooooo for being so angry with Harry, Lucius was being a bastard, he must realise why he did it, why he said those things!!!!
A brilliant update as always, truelly amazing story, i've been here from the beginning and i'll be with you too the end!!!!

Update ASAP!!!
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This chaprter was very good! Only I thought Lucius have "more" in him - I enjoyed the scene in the first "indago" story, where he saw how Draco was seeing Harry almost die... But your Lucius is very good. Poor boys.

Poor Harry!! *cries* i don't care that Draco's trying to protect them, he should treat Harry like that!!!! Harry should have reacted like that to Luicius, but Draco shouldn't have done that to Harry! ...please update soon!

Poor Harry! Need chapter 21! What a family to be married into. Harry gave it all away? The Potter and the Black fortunes? Holy moly! That was thoughtful and yet stupid at the same time.

FUCK DRACO! He's was such an asshole in this chapter. I hope Harry runs away..with the baby and all. Hmm.. maybe live in a little cottage with swiss cheese walls, chedder shingles, motz. tiles....cheese...mmmmm....cheese......
Eh. Anyway. Yeah and stab Lucius in the eye. Great chapter. The only piece of constructive criticism that i can give you is that right about now, it feels like you're cranking out chapters mainly to subdue the masses and please the reviewers. The pace of Current Situations seems a bit slow...like it's crawling and stopping every so often to elaborate upon 'this or that' which could be summed up much more quickly than believed. There's nothing wrong with your writing- it's just the pace of the whole shindig, from my perspective. A short chapter dedicated to a meeting with parents that sets up the idea that they can destory their children's lives? I don't think it should take one whole chapter to portray this (besides, you had gotten this point across through earlier chapters). Maybe take a break from writing or something. Write things at your own pace. From your latest description it seems like you're trying to meet 'deadlines' which may in turn compromise the quality of your chapters...not your writing, your writing is pretty good...just the pace of the storyline.
Anyway, I'm not here to beat you up with a club or anything. I really appreciate the time and effort you put into your works, and your big fanbase really shows for this. Just- maybe you can take a look back at the chapters you had written or are writing and get rid of all the excess baggage? I'm stupid. Great work though. Thanks.

Just finished up the current chapters. It was v. good, and I am quite happy with how the story is going. Great job!

oh wow, angry draco. Hehe i love it!!! I like it when he takes control of his powers every now and then.please update soon!!

eeep!!! and meeeep!!
Explosive chapter! And wow is Draco fun when he is mad. Is mai a supero or subicio? How soon will we know? And if she is subicio wont she need to marry an indago(in reference to the contracts and whatnot) Lucius is exciting like this but it seems like his love for his son would come out a bit more somewhere? Wonderful wonderful chapter and please write more!!

Really great sequel! I love it!

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