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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person HP Fan
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh cool, i luv the way harry's acting. i'm looking forward to seeing what's wrong with him.
person kara_havok
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::lays face down on the floor and sobs:: please please...write more...PLEASE! !! ::rubs cheek against foot:: i need more. im dying..dont do this..dont leave the cliffhanger. this is horrible. whats wrong with harry??
person shini-chan02
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!! *dies*

WHY ISN'T THIS FINISHED!!! I am literally addicted to this fic!! I stayed up about 5 hours longer just to finish the first one, and now there's a cliffhanger!!! Please please please update quickly and finish it!! I need to know what's going on with Harry!!!
person Frikin Carefree
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay First OF the Reason Why I am Review a second Time is because I am a it tired of see you soo close to 600 reviews and You wont get to tip the scale until you update again. I also Wanted to say that This story Is awesome even If its Half-assed Your an awesome Writer and have Very original Ideas and should be very proud of yourself for your accomplishments. (unlike Me who can't spell...)
person hp_reader
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man - if I could be there with you, I'd be down on my knees rubbing my head against your leg, begging you to Please - UPDATE - Please, Please - update soon. I know many get turned off by Draco getting violent, but that's the whole theme that has run thru this story from day one - if people don't like it, they should quit reading...the whole animalistic thing is what makes this story a turn on!
person Dragonlover
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update!

But aren't you being a little harsh on Harry? I don't get why he is doing all of those weird things I read the first Indago but it just doesn't make sense. On another note, I LOVE your writing. in my opinion, it is one of the best D/H fics I've read so far.

Toodles.
person eimiaj
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! what's going on?! whats the matter with Harry? Draco better get his ass in gear and ask Snape if he knows anything! *bites nails* oh dear! poor Harry! please update soon!!!! i have to know whats going on!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
person JJ
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do have a lot of ideas on how to really mess with their heads, don't you???? Draco better contact Snape ASAP. Why does everyont keep forgetting that no one has any knowledge of a sub for their species??? Sounds like Harry's nature needs something more and no one understands, least of all Harry. You have a devious mind to invent all these twists and turns. Please keep it up!
person Ren
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ew. I hope this doesn't turn into a Top!Harry, Bottom!Draco, because i'll stop reading.
person Icynow
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Over the past three days I discovered you series on Indago and have now red up to the current chapter. I feel complelled to guess at what will happen between Harry and the American Superio, Murdoch. Since the first ebook, as I call them, I have been mental trying to conjure an Indago Relationship 'out' for Harry. You stayed true to the cannon Draco, resulting a a man unfit to every keep Harry. I like the angle you have chosen with Harry'a sub instincts decreasing and now trying to act as an almost temporary Superior, assuming the was where the Neville plot was going. You plot has been, humorous, suspensful, and upsetting, witht the making of greatness in Potter slash.