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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person eimiaj
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooohh! so that is what was going on! lol makes sense. hmmm the whole chase scene was HOT too! *drools* can't wait until your next update!!!! don't take too long please!! ^-^ hehe
person Frikin CArefree
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love this Chapter definitely the sweetest of them all. A lot of insight on Draco's and Harry's relationship in the past too. Worth the wait, I guess i could wait so more for the next. Glad to see your doing better though
person Rit
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story--I really do. But I just want to scream at Harry to wake up from all of this and assert some control. It irritates me! I know the reason for it--but it's...upsetting. Of course, I'll continue to read. I adore your Severus! I want to lock him up in my closet and never let him out!
person StrangeLove
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you so much for the wonderful update! Absolutely perfect - it's pretty close to what I was suspecting the problem might be...Draco basically needs to "take charge" even if Harry doesn't like it until the birth experience is a bit more past...and I sure hope to see some complexity in the future, with that American guy coming back into the picture - I love a jealous Draco!
person Servatsia
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, honestly, how could I ever doubt you!

In the beginning, this story just did not feel as strong as the other, it felt without as much purpose, but the latest chapter ties it all in and reminds me why I waited so terribly for this sequel.

A must read.
person Philomel
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update! Update! *squee*
So Harry trying to rape both Neville and this boy are simply trials to test Draco's dominance? That's a bit extreme, isn't it? Is that all??
This bottled pheromone might come in handy every now and then. Sev is so my hero. Keep going, I can hardly wait for the "play" part!
person Wildfire
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm glade he didn't rape the kid that would be bad. Great chapter cant wait for more
person doesitmatter
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why must u always tease me with your short chapters and cliff hangers?!?!?!
person bb
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok that makes so much more sense. You are an extraordinary author. To be able to come up with this stuff. I cant even figure out whats wrong wiht Harry sometimes. I love this story
person ae
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stellar chapter. I always wanted to use that word..eh..GREAT job on this one though!