rate_review Reviews

I LOVE this story. There is everything in it - a clever plot, emotions, a very hot sex, really interesting moments, many people... But today I am affraid, really affraid. I think maybe somebody deliberately plays with Harry to force Draco to break with him? Maybe Lucius? Or that odd other dominant?


I hope, really really hope their daughter will be OK. I hope they will found a reason - because Harry IS NOT cruel and evil - we know him!! And if there is some foe as a cause, I hope they will very painfully and slowly KILL him...

I hope it is not Lucius as an "evil shadow", because I remember him from the first Indago serie, where he helped Draco in the infirmary, where he understood how much his son NEEDS and LOVES Harry... I am so affraid about them and about their relationship - I know even if there is some reason for Harry's behaviour, there is too much bad between them now to forgive easily... And I love them both, really... The previous chapter was so hot and wonderful and now I am so affraid.., I HOPE MAIA WILL BE OK!! You are a devil! Please, update SOON! I am crying and begging...

Hey, I've been reading for awhile, and well, this is the first comment I've dropped, sorry. I do love your story though, it's great!

The one thing about this chapter is, that I assume that you have Beauxbatons as an all girls school, which in the movie it is, but in canon (the books) it and Durmstrang are both co-ed like Hogwarts, so, it wouldn't matter if Maia went to Hogwarts, Beauxbatons or wherever. And, I realise that is a really long, run-on sentence, but hey, I still love your story.

-Alter

omfg you are sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mean I can't believe you'd leave us with a cliffhanger like that!!!!!!!!!!!
you may be evil and sadistic to leave your readers like that, but thanks so much for being a kickass writer.
P.S. YOU CAN'T LEAVE US LIKE THAT YOU HAVE TO UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my GOD, what has he done. I don't understand what's wrong with him! my chest hearted, after I read where he let go...Oh my god, that was a great chapter, I was so into it, I couldn't look away if I wanted to. What's wrong with him, is he under a spell a every powerful spell. I think you should up-date soon. I'd hate to say it, but I think Draco should hurt him bad...


Elle the Evil one

OMG!!! WHATS GOING ON?!?!? ::sobs:: MAIA! ! !

whats wrong with harry? is it post-moderm depression??? ...he cant hurt maia.

please write more!!

Holy shit! What the hell is going on?!?!?!

It's that ELF! What is he doing to Harry and on whose orders! He is obviously giving something to Harry on Lucius orders....Gah! Update soon!

More please..
That is a very good story,
I thought the first one rocked, but this one's got more insight into the character's,
and how they've growen through out their Marriage and how the baby's adding into the mix..

omg a baby! *dances in joy* blah yay for happy stuff ^_^ no more anger and the story for being so sad and wonderful at the same time! all thats left is the brilliant part =P please update soon!

Well, it took me all day to read both stories and I gotta say i'm in love with it. I hope everything works out for the two.

Elle the Evil one