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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! Talk about a cliffie!!!!!!! AAF needs some kind of email notification that lets people know when the author updates lol. Seriously though...I'm hooked!!! I read your original one about 4-5 months ago when you posted it on LJ and I've been following this one awhile. Can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
person Nitasha
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*screams*
=O *is really hating Harry now*

person Weathered
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG HARRY IS...wow....something is WRONG with Harry...obviously...what the hell is his PROBLEM?!?! I hope we find out soon, because this is starting to become a bit unnerving...
person S. Novak
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh... My... God.... *screams incoherently* aggggabbeeee!!! *shouts random expletives* OH GOD NO!!!!
person The Shadow Bandit
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That about sums it all up...wow. If I were a betting person I would bet that the other male dom from America is doing something to alter Harry's state so that he gets kicked out of his pack. That way he has an opportunity to mate with the sub as he indicated that he wanted to in the beginning. I think he is putting something in either Harry's food or water that makes him not only resistant to the the doms scent but also makes him have the need himself to dominate and to seek out other companions. This story is fantastic with all its twists and turns. Who knows that guy from America may even be working with Lucius as we all know how much regard Harry's father in law has for him.

As for the baby, I can't believe that you would let her die. I think that either Snape or a house elf arrives in the nick of time to save her. Please update soon.

Thanks for sharing your story with me.

Shadow Bandit
person Kayla
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. my.. God.. No effing way.. O__O. I am in complete. And. Utter. Shock.
person Roberta
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just what's in that tea and who's making Harry drink it? Keep it coming, please!
person stray
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uh-oh. was the tea in the basket from that american chap?
person lain-trigger01
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Tea! There's something wrong with the tea! ... since when has it been Harry's favorite? Harry's actions are just way too bipolar for there to be anything naturally wrong with him... unless its some weird hormone instinct thing? :( please don't kill Maia!
person Philomel
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you're trying to kill us here with this hell of a cliffy, don't you? I want to know what's going on with Harry! This "needing more dominance" explanation doesn't suffice. I hope Snape is coming soon. Please update soon, or I'll die of too much suspense and anticipation.